Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, I never make a list for that because I only want to buy things that I witnessed and I don't want to make a plan to find out things that I want to buy. I only want to. Say it don't have the decissions.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
No, I never make list for my work because I don't want to let a plan to disturb my Co work. If you if I have a plan now have no passion and energy to figure out those up things and I. Well, feel. Disc.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, maybe they are easy going people like Maine, we don't want to plan. In order to, uh, wrist strict, there's things that I that we ought to do. I want to do things that. I want to stop that I saw.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
If I have to make a list, I suppose I will do that on the phone because the phone is very convenient. I could took it, I could take it out and then. Rick or something? Anywhere and anytime. It's a little bit. Complicated to make.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,缺乏连贯性。建议简化表达,直接回答问题并补充具体原因,避免语法错误。
Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I like to decide what to buy based on what I see in the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答表达混乱,语法错误较多,内容不连贯。建议先明确回答问题,再用简洁句子说明原因,避免重复和不完整句子。
Ejemplo: No, I don't make lists for my work because I feel that plans can limit my creativity. I prefer to work flexibly without strict schedules.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯,表达不清晰,存在语法和词汇错误。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they are easy-going and prefer not to be restricted by plans. They want to do things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但有语法错误和表达不完整。建议注意时态和句子完整性,使用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ejemplo: If I have to make a list, I prefer to use my phone because it is convenient. I can take it anywhere and check my list anytime easily.
× No, I never make list for my work because I don't want to let a plan to disturb my Co work.
✓ No, I never make lists for my work because I don't want to let a plan disturb my coworker.
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为表示泛指多次制作的清单;“Co work”应为“coworker”,表示同事。
× If you if I have a plan now have no passion and energy to figure out those up things and I. Well, feel. Disc.
✓ If I have a plan now, I have no passion and energy to figure out those things, and I feel discouraged.
句中缺少必要的介词和连词,导致句子不通顺。应补充逗号和连词,使句子完整且表达清晰。
× Well, maybe they are easy going people like Maine, we don't want to plan.
✓ Well, maybe they are easy-going people like me; we don't want to plan.
“Maine”应为“me”,表示“像我一样”;“easy going”应连写为“easy-going”,形容词。
× In order to, uh, wrist strict, there's things that I that we ought to do.
✓ In order to be strict, there are things that we ought to do.
“wrist strict”应为“be strict”,表示“变得严格”;“there's”应为“there are”,因为后面是复数名词。
× I want to do things that. I want to stop that I saw.
✓ I want to do things that I want to stop doing that I saw.
句子结构混乱,缺少连词和正确的代词使用,需调整使句子通顺。
× If I have to make a list, I suppose I will do that on the phone because the phone is very convenient. I could took it, I could take it out and then. Rick or something? Anywhere and anytime.
✓ If I have to make a list, I suppose I will do that on the phone because the phone is very convenient. I could take it out and check or something anywhere and anytime.
“took”应为“take”,动词时态错误;“Rick”应为“check”,拼写错误;句子中介词使用不当,需调整。