List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "and which saves not only money. But also saves time" is awkward and should be combined properly. Try to use linking words like "which" or "and" correctly to make your answer more natural and coherent. Also, avoid splitting sentences unnecessarily. Keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and ensure smooth flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and focused on what I need to buy. This way, I can avoid impulse purchases, which saves both money and time. Moreover, making a list makes the whole shopping experience more efficient and less stressful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, such as "Moreover. Moreover," and "***** and make me more efficient." Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words properly to connect ideas. Also, try to provide specific examples or reasons to support your points. Keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks. Moreover, following a list increases my productivity and makes me more efficient. For example, I can prioritize important tasks and complete them on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has minor grammatical errors, such as "making list" instead of "making lists" and "a time consuming" instead of "time-consuming." Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "and" properly to connect your ideas smoothly. Adding a little more detail or example would improve your answer.

Ejemplo: Some individuals do not like making lists because they think it is time-consuming, and they feel confident that they can remember everything without writing it down. For instance, some people prefer to rely on their memory rather than spending time creating lists.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "make list on my book on my phone." Try to be clear and concise. Use linking words like "because" and "and" properly. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and natural. Adding a specific example would enhance your answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. I can easily make necessary changes to the digital list, and I can share it with my friends or family members if needed, which is very convenient.

× This way I can avoid impulse purchases and which saves not only money.

✓ This way I can avoid impulse purchases, which saves not only money.

The conjunction 'and which' is incorrect here. The correct structure is to use a comma before 'which' to introduce a non-restrictive relative clause. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But also saves time.

✓ But it also saves time.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject. Adding 'it' as the subject corrects the sentence structure and makes it complete.

× Moreover. Moreover, by following a list can increases my productivity.

✓ Moreover, following a list can increase my productivity.

The sentence has a repeated 'Moreover' and incorrect verb form 'can increases'. Removing the duplicate and using the base verb 'increase' after modal 'can' corrects the sentence.

× ***** and make me more efficient.

✓ It also makes me more efficient.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It also makes me more efficient.' completes the sentence and maintains coherence.

× Some individuals do not like making list because they think it is a time consuming and that they feel confident that they can remember everything without writing it down.

✓ Some individuals do not like making lists because they think it is time-consuming and feel confident that they can remember everything without writing it down.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'that they feel' is redundant and can be simplified.

× I prefer to make list on my book on my phone because it is always with me.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'On my book on my phone' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'on my phone' suffices.

× I can make necessary changes on digital list and I can share with my friends and to my family members if needed.

✓ I can make necessary changes to the digital list and share it with my friends and family members if needed.

The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to making changes. Also, 'share with my friends and to my family members' is inconsistent; 'share it with my friends and family members' is correct.