List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些重复和不连贯，建议回答时避免重复词汇，保持句子简洁且连贯。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明你的习惯。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously and enjoy the process.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确时态和句子结构，避免口语化的表达，且保持逻辑清晰。

Ejemplo: No, I prefer to do things spontaneously. I have tried making lists before, but it didn't work because I lack the self-discipline to follow them strictly.

Sugerencia: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，建议先给出直接回答，再用具体原因支持，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find plans unrealistic or difficult to follow, especially if they are not disciplined enough.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但有时态错误和表达不够简洁，建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient to check my schedule. Also, I don't like writing long lists on paper because it can be tiring.

× Not really. I don't like making plans because I'm I'm very casual. Casual doing things.

✓ Not really. I don't like making plans because I'm very casual and casual about doing things.

The original sentence has a repetition ('I'm I'm') and a fragment ('Casual doing things') which is not a complete sentence. Combining these into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I preferred doing things spontaneously.

✓ No, I prefer doing things spontaneously.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Preferred' is past tense; 'prefer' is the correct present tense form here.

× I have tried to do it but it doesn't work at all because I'm not self disciplined enough to force myself to do things as the plan works so it doesn't work for me.

✓ I have tried to do it but it doesn't work at all because I'm not self-disciplined enough to force myself to do things according to the plan, so it doesn't work for me.

The phrase 'as the plan works' is incorrect; 'according to the plan' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'self disciplined' should be hyphenated as 'self-disciplined'.

× So I don't like to do face.

✓ So I don't like to do that.

The phrase 'do face' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended meaning is 'do that' referring to making plans or lists.

× Because some plans there are two imaginative people usually make plans that.

✓ Because some plans are made by very imaginative people.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Reordering and simplifying the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Uhm are out of reality is no realistic and appropriate so and they are not disciplined enough to do things.

✓ They are unrealistic and inappropriate, and they are not disciplined enough to do things.

The phrase 'are out of reality is no realistic and appropriate' is grammatically incorrect. Using 'unrealistic and inappropriate' correctly describes the plans.

× Making plans are not suit for the people that are not disciplined.

✓ Making plans is not suitable for people who are not disciplined.

'Making plans' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'suit' should be 'suitable', and 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people.

× I preferred to make it on the phone because I carried the phone all the time with me, so it's very convenient for me to check out my schedule in plans and I don't like writing.

✓ I prefer to make it on the phone because I carry the phone with me all the time, so it's very convenient for me to check my schedule and plans, and I don't like writing.

The answer should be in present tense to match the question. 'Preferred' and 'carried' are past tense; 'prefer' and 'carry' are correct present tense forms. Also, 'check out my schedule in plans' should be 'check my schedule and plans'.

× It's not very convenient and a little bit exhausted when you want to make a long list of something.

✓ It's not very convenient and a little bit exhausting when you want to make a long list of something.

'Exhausted' describes a feeling, but here the list-making process causes the feeling, so 'exhausting' (the adjective form describing the process) is correct.