Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Sure, I always miss make a list when I'm going to grocery stores 'cause I think that I need to make a lease or necessary items such as food or fruit, vegetables.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Often make a list for my future plan or my work in tomorrow because I think that I need to focus on what I'm doing. So I always write it to the list before going to bed to make sure that I can pay attention. To study.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think because making less take much time, specifically from one to two hours for many people. To complete them low for. Important things on in tomorrow. So I think that people don't like To Do List.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
On the line busy as a bee are often make a list on on paper before going to bed to avoid getting forgetting necessary work on tomorrow and more more and. I'm sure that I can pay attention to what I'm doing.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before going to the grocery store because it helps me remember to buy necessary items like fruits, vegetables, and other food.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách nối câu để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work or future plans because it helps me focus. I usually write it down before going to bed to make sure I remember everything the next day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách đơn giản, rõ ràng và sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh.
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time, sometimes one or two hours, and they find it boring or unnecessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper before going to bed because it helps me remember important tasks for the next day and stay focused.
× Sure, I always miss make a list when I'm going to grocery stores 'cause I think that I need to make a lease or necessary items such as food or fruit, vegetables.
✓ Sure, I always miss making a list when I'm going to grocery stores because I think that I need to make a list of necessary items such as food, fruit, and vegetables.
The verb 'miss' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' to indicate the action that is missed. Also, 'make a lease' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Additionally, 'fruit, vegetables' should be separated by 'and' for clarity.
× Often make a list for my future plan or my work in tomorrow because I think that I need to focus on what I'm doing.
✓ I often make a list for my future plans or my work tomorrow because I think that I need to focus on what I'm doing.
The phrase 'in tomorrow' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted here, so 'tomorrow' should stand alone without 'in'. Also, 'future plan' should be plural 'future plans' to match the context.
× So I always write it to the list before going to bed to make sure that I can pay attention. To study.
✓ So I always write it on the list before going to bed to make sure that I can pay attention to studying.
The correct preposition with 'write' and 'list' is 'on' not 'to'. Also, 'pay attention to study' should be 'pay attention to studying' to use the gerund form after the preposition 'to'.
× I think because making less take much time, specifically from one to two hours for many people.
✓ I think making lists takes much time, specifically from one to two hours for many people.
The verb 'making' is correct as a gerund here, but 'less' should be 'lists' (plural noun). Also, the verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'making lists'.
× To complete them low for. Important things on in tomorrow.
✓ To complete them, especially important things for tomorrow.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect prepositions 'low for' and 'on in'. The corrected sentence uses 'for tomorrow' to indicate the time reference and removes unclear words.
× So I think that people don't like To Do List.
✓ So I think that people don't like to-do lists.
'To Do List' should be pluralized as 'to-do lists' and written in lowercase unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'to-do' is hyphenated as a compound adjective.
× On the line busy as a bee are often make a list on on paper before going to bed to avoid getting forgetting necessary work on tomorrow and more more and.
✓ When I'm busy as a bee, I often make a list on paper before going to bed to avoid forgetting necessary work for tomorrow and more.
The phrase 'On the line busy as a bee' is incorrect; it should be 'When I'm busy as a bee'. The verb phrase 'are often make' is incorrect; it should be 'I often make'. The preposition 'on on paper' has a repeated 'on' and should be 'on paper'. 'Getting forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'forgetting'. Also, 'work on tomorrow' should be 'work for tomorrow'.
× I'm sure that I can pay attention to what I'm doing.
✓ I'm sure that I can pay attention to what I'm doing.
This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.