List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "so to be honest" và "uh" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể giải thích lý do tại sao bạn không cần danh sách và cách bạn nhớ các món đồ cần mua.

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a shopping list because I trust my memory to remember everything I need. For instance, I often plan my meals in advance, so I know exactly what to buy without writing it down.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại các cụm từ như "I'm so to be honest" và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trình bày câu trả lời theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề, lý do và mong muốn trong tương lai. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn không thường làm danh sách vì lý do gì và khi nào bạn sẽ thử làm.

Ejemplo: I usually don't make lists for work because I find it time-consuming. However, I think making lists could help me stay organized, so I plan to try it when I have more free time.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "so", "uh", "like" quá nhiều. Bạn nên đưa ra lý do cụ thể hơn tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, ví dụ như cảm thấy phiền phức hoặc không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết và hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy, ví dụ như tính tiện lợi và dễ truy cập.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily check or update my list anytime and anywhere.

× So to be honest and don't make any list whenever I'm shopping.

✓ So to be honest, I don't make any list whenever I'm shopping.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'I' before the verb 'don't make'. In English, modal verbs like 'don't' require a subject before them. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I can remember everything that I need to buy of, so that's not really necessary for me.

✓ I can remember everything that I need to buy, so that's not really necessary for me.

The preposition 'of' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I'm so to be honest I don't make any list for my works or for my study.

✓ So to be honest, I don't make any list for my work or for my study.

The phrase 'I'm so to be honest' is incorrect; it should be 'So to be honest'. Also, 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is uncountable here. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× 'Cause of I think that I'm a bit lazy, so does this.

✓ 'Cause I think that I'm a bit lazy, so does this.

The phrase 'Cause of I think' is incorrect; it should be 'Cause I think'. The word 'of' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Like impossible for me, so I don't know if it's really work, but if I have time I really want to make a list.

✓ It's like impossible for me, so I don't know if it really works, but if I have time, I really want to make a list.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb in the first clause and has incorrect verb form 'work' instead of 'works'. Adding 'It's' and correcting the verb form improves sentence structure.

× So in my opinion, I think that. Uh, I don't make any list because I'm really lazy and I think that I can like rely on that list to do anything.

✓ So in my opinion, I think that I don't make any list because I'm really lazy and I think that I can rely on that list to do anything.

The original sentence has an unnecessary period after 'that' and the phrase 'can like rely' is informal and incorrect. Removing the period and 'like' improves grammar and clarity.

× So I think that people will like, also like me.

✓ So I think that people will also like me.

The phrase 'will like, also like me' is awkward and incorrect. Rearranging to 'will also like me' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× So in my opinion, I will choose my phone 'cause it's like I think that is more convenience than using paper.

✓ So in my opinion, I will choose my phone because I think that it is more convenient than using paper.

The word 'convenience' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'convenient'. Also, 'cause it's like I think that' is informal and redundant; replacing with 'because I think that' improves formality and clarity.

× Uh, like whenever you go to any way, you would need to bring your phone.

✓ Uh, like whenever you go anywhere, you would need to bring your phone.

The phrase 'go to any way' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go anywhere'. This correction fixes the preposition and word choice error.