List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "for cat like a foot items." Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea multiple times. Aim for concise and coherent sentences with proper linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. Since I have a hectic schedule, the list ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and completeness. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about how the list helps you at work.

Ejemplo: I volunteer as a medical office assistant at a clinic. Sometimes, I make a list to prioritize which patients to book first because I receive many phone calls. Writing the list on paper helps me stay organized and manage appointments efficiently.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like "because" and "however" to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and try to express your opinion more confidently and precisely.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory. However, most people prefer lists nowadays due to their busy schedules, as it helps them remember tasks they need to complete.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "I don't have always fine and paper." Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's more convenient than paper since I can access my list anytime and easily update it.

× Yes I always make a list before going to a shopping because it really helped me to remember that what items I have to purchase.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it really helps me to remember which items I have to purchase.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present habitual action 'always make'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'going to a shopping' is incorrect; 'going shopping' is the correct expression.

× Yes I always make a list before going to a shopping because it really helped me to remember that what items I have to purchase.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it really helps me to remember which items I have to purchase.

The phrase 'going to a shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'going shopping' without 'to' or 'a'.

× Honestly speaking these days I really have a hectic schedule and due to which I am really for cat like a foot items over things I have to purchase or not.

✓ Honestly speaking, these days I really have a hectic schedule, and because of that, I am really forgetful about which items or things I have to purchase or not.

The original sentence uses incorrect words and tense. 'For cat like a foot items over things' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction uses present tense 'am forgetful' to match 'these days' and clarifies the meaning.

× So list really helped me a lot.

✓ So the list really helps me a lot.

The noun 'list' is singular and should be preceded by the definite article 'the'. Also, 'helped' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense 'helps'.

× Not all the times I make the list but sometimes I make list like which patients I have to book 1st and which not because sometime I just take the phone calls of the patients and then I just write on the pen and paper so they.

✓ Not all the time do I make a list, but sometimes I make a list of which patients I have to book first and which not, because sometimes I just take phone calls from patients and then write on pen and paper.

The phrase 'Not all the times' is incorrect; 'Not all the time' is correct. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× Not all the times I make the list but sometimes I make list like which patients I have to book 1st and which not because sometime I just take the phone calls of the patients and then I just write on the pen and paper so they.

✓ Not all the time do I make a list, but sometimes I make a list of which patients I have to book first and which not, because sometimes I just take phone calls from patients and then write on pen and paper.

The phrase 'take the phone calls of the patients' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'take phone calls from patients'. Also, 'write on the pen and paper' should be 'write on pen and paper' or 'write with pen and paper'.

× Not all the times I make the list but sometimes I make list like which patients I have to book 1st and which not because sometime I just take the phone calls of the patients and then I just write on the pen and paper so they.

✓ Not all the time do I make a list, but sometimes I make a list of which patients I have to book first and which not, because sometimes I just take phone calls from patients and then write on pen and paper so they know.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so they.' It likely intends 'so they know' or similar. The pronoun 'they' needs a verb to complete the thought.

× In my point of view or some people may have good memory so that's why they are not preferred to make list.

✓ In my point of view, some people may have good memory, so that's why they do not prefer to make lists.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used; it should be a comma. Also, 'are not preferred to make list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'do not prefer to make lists'.

× But honestly speaking, I think most of the people these days prefer to make list because of their busy schedules because people always forget to uh no like what things they have to done or what they're already done.

✓ But honestly speaking, I think most people these days prefer to make lists because of their busy schedules, as people often forget what things they have to do or what they've already done.

'Most of the people' should be 'most people'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'. 'Have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do'. 'They're already done' should be 'they've already done' or better 'they've already done'.

× I mostly prefer to make a list on my phone because I always put my phone in my pocket with me because I don't have always fine and paper.

✓ I mostly prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry my phone in my pocket with me, and I don't always have pen and paper.

The phrase 'put my phone in my pocket with me' is awkward; 'carry my phone in my pocket' is better. 'I don't have always fine and paper' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't always have pen and paper'.

× So that's why I always prefer on phone and I think it's a good way and it's also the easier way to make a list and we can see anything at any time, so.

✓ So that's why I always prefer using my phone, and I think it's a good and easier way to make a list, and we can see anything at any time.

The phrase 'prefer on phone' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer using my phone'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so.' which is unnecessary. Also, 'it's also the easier way' should be 'it's a good and easier way' for clarity.