Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Do you make a list when you shop?
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes I do. I make a very perfectly still for my work.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Be 'cause I think some people like making lists. Be 'cause it is very convenient and it is very good.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Yes I do. I prefer to make list on paper 'cause I don't like to use my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议直接回答问题,并简要说明原因。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构,并具体说明列表如何帮助你的工作。
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a detailed list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 15.0Sugerencia: 回答内容与问题不符,且表达不清楚。建议直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢做清单,并给出具体原因。
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误,且表达不够自然。建议直接回答偏好,并说明原因,使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to write things down and I don't like using my phone for this purpose.
× I make a very perfectly still for my work.
✓ I make a very perfect list for my work.
句中使用了副词“perfectly”修饰形容词“still”,且“still”应为“list”。应使用形容词“perfect”修饰名词“list”,且拼写错误需改正。
× Be 'cause I think some people like making lists.
✓ Because I think some people like making lists.
“Be 'cause”是口语缩写形式,书面语应使用完整形式“Because”。
× Be 'cause it is very convenient and it is very good.
✓ Because it is very convenient and very good.
同上,使用完整的“Because”代替口语缩写“Be 'cause”,且去掉重复的“it is”使句子更简洁。
× I prefer to make list on paper 'cause I don't like to use my phone.
✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because I don't like to use my phone.
“list”应为复数形式“lists”,因为表达的是一般习惯或多次行为。且“'cause”应改为正式的“because”。