Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Actually I want make a list because I think it's troublesome.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list what things should I do and whatever to do. I think it's making me effective. Tutti always a problem.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe they think is troublesome and meaningless.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm not a careful person. Maybe I would have lost the paper, but in my phone I can read it whatever I want to do.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,直接回答问题,并解释原因。
Ejemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it a bit troublesome and prefer to buy things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答结构混乱,语法错误多,表达不清晰。建议先明确回答,再用连词补充具体细节,避免无意义词汇。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list of tasks I need to complete because it helps me stay organized and work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答简短且缺少连贯性,语法不完整。建议使用完整句子,并用连词扩展理由。
Ejemplo: Some people might not like making lists because they find it troublesome and believe it doesn't help them stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但语法和表达仍有不足。建议使用更准确的表达和连词,使回答更流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I tend to lose paper lists, and having them on my phone makes it easier to check whenever I need.
× Actually I want make a list because I think it's troublesome.
✓ Actually I want to make a list because I think it's troublesome.
动词want后面需要接不定式to do,缺少to导致语法错误。
× Yes, I always make a list what things should I do and whatever to do.
✓ Yes, I always make a list of what things I should do and whatever needs to be done.
句子结构混乱,缺少介词of,且从句语序错误,应调整为陈述语序。
× I think it's making me effective.
✓ I think it makes me effective.
这里不应使用进行时态,且it作为主语,动词用一般现在时makes。
× Tutti always a problem.
✓ Tutti is always a problem.
句子缺少谓语动词is,导致句子不完整。
× Maybe they think is troublesome and meaningless.
✓ Maybe they think it is troublesome and meaningless.
think后面缺少宾语it,导致句子不完整。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm not a careful person.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm not a careful person.
此句无明显介词错误,保持原句。
× Maybe I would have lost the paper, but in my phone I can read it whatever I want to do.
✓ Maybe I would have lost the paper, but on my phone I can read it whenever I want to.
介词应为on my phone,且句尾表达应为whenever I want to,表示任何时候。