List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to make your sentences complete and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your shopping habits.

Ejemplo: I usually make a list when I need to buy specific items like groceries. However, if I am just browsing or shopping casually, I don't make a list.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but fragmented. Try to use complete sentences and explain your opinion clearly with linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I don't make a list for my work because I believe that going with the flow is more effective for me. Therefore, I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and repetitive. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Avoid saying 'I don't know' in your answer.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be more flexible with their plans.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit fragmented. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more natural and clear.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because writing things down helps me remember them more clearly.

× Sometimes I make a list and sometimes I didn't because if I had to.

✓ Sometimes I make a list and sometimes I don't because if I have to.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Didn't' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'don't' to match 'make' and 'have to'. Use present tense for habitual actions.

× Buy some specific things like groceries or any MB EMS.

✓ I buy some specific things like groceries or any medicines.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Also, 'MB EMS' seems incorrect; likely intended 'medicines'. Complete the sentence with subject and verb for clarity.

× Then I will make a list or if I just. Roaming around something like. Dan.

✓ Then I will make a list, or if I am just roaming around somewhere like Dan.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms. 'Roaming' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form present participle correctly. Also, 'something like Dan' is unclear; 'somewhere like Dan' is better.

× No, I didn't make a list for my work because.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Didn't make' is past tense; 'don't make' is appropriate for habitual action.

× I believe that. Going with the flow is very much. Effective for me so.

✓ I believe that going with the flow is very effective for me, so.

The sentence is broken into fragments improperly. Combine the parts into a complete sentence for clarity and correctness.

× This is the why I didn't make a list for my work.

✓ This is why I don't make a list for my work.

Incorrect phrase 'the why' should be 'why'. Also, tense should be present to match habitual action.

× Some people like to make a list and some doesn't.

✓ Some people like to make a list and some don't.

'Some' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number.

× It depends on them and they're thinking the way they think.

✓ It depends on them and the way they think.

The phrase 'they're thinking the way they think' is redundant and awkward. Simplify to 'the way they think' for clarity.

× I don't know what to say.

✓ I don't know what to say.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer to make a list on paper. Rather than phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because.

The preposition 'on' is needed before 'my phone' to parallel 'on paper'. Also, 'my phone' is more natural than just 'phone'.

× If I write it in a paper.

✓ If I write it on paper,

The phrase 'in a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be connected to the next part.

× I think I could remember it more clearly rather than my phone, so I believe that.

✓ I think I can remember it more clearly than on my phone, so I believe that.

Use 'can' for present ability instead of 'could'. Also, 'more clearly than on my phone' is the correct comparative structure.

× Writing in a paper is always more.

✓ Writing on paper is always better.

The phrase 'in a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is correct. Also, 'is always more' is incomplete; 'is always better' completes the thought.