List— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Anne. Yes. If it's too too many items. If there are too many items, I would definitely make a list to remind myself what to buy and what to not buy. But if it's just a few items? Then I'm not going to waste time just making a list for shopping.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I make a short list from 2:00 to 3:00 tasks everyday so I could catch up on the word easily and it works when I make it super short. But it wouldn't work very well if I do if I'm too greedy and make it very long and then.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Anne. Because they feel restricted, they feel forced to do something which affects the mood to actually engage in the work 100%. Therefore, whatever making, whenever it comes to work, they just prefer. Going.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
An A thorn obviously because it's more convenient to keep track of all the things on your phone. Plus I keep my phone alongside with my body all the time, so it would be easier for me to bring that portable device everywhere and keep track of my work instead of.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "too too many" và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I have many items to buy because it helps me remember everything. However, if I only need a few things, I prefer to shop without a list to save time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lặp lại. Hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cụ thể hơn về cách bạn làm việc.
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a short list of tasks every day, usually between two to three items, so I can focus better. It works well when the list is short, but if I make it too long, I find it hard to complete everything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do với các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and forced, which can negatively affect their motivation. Therefore, they prefer to work spontaneously without a list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn bị ngắt quãng và có lỗi phát âm ("An A thorn" không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh ngắt quãng. Hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.
Ejemplo: I obviously prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Since I always carry my phone with me, it's easier to keep track of my tasks anytime and anywhere.
Gramática
× If it's too too many items.
✓ If there are too many items.
The phrase 'it's too many items' is incorrect because 'items' is plural and requires a plural verb form. The correct form is 'there are too many items.' This is a singular and plural issue where the verb must agree with the plural noun.
× I keep my phone alongside with my body all the time, so it would be easier for me to bring that portable device everywhere and keep track of my work instead of.
✓ I keep my phone alongside my body all the time, so it is easier for me to bring that portable device everywhere and keep track of my work.
The phrase 'alongside with' is incorrect because 'alongside' already means 'next to' and does not require the preposition 'with.' The correct usage is 'alongside my body.' Also, the sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.
× If there are too many items, I would definitely make a list to remind myself what to buy and what to not buy.
✓ If there are too many items, I would definitely make a list to remind myself what to buy and what not to buy.
The phrase 'what to not buy' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'what not to buy.' This is an issue with pronoun and word order usage in the sentence.
× Yes, I make a short list from 2:00 to 3:00 tasks everyday so I could catch up on the word easily and it works when I make it super short.
✓ Yes, I make a short list of tasks from 2:00 to 3:00 every day so I can catch up on the work easily, and it works when I make it super short.
The phrase 'catch up on the word' is incorrect; it should be 'catch up on the work.' Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace,' but the adverb 'every day' is needed here. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice.
× But it wouldn't work very well if I do if I'm too greedy and make it very long and then.
✓ But it wouldn't work very well if I am too greedy and make it very long.
The sentence contains redundant conjunctions 'if I do if' and an incomplete ending 'and then.' The correction removes redundancy and completes the thought properly.
× Because they feel restricted, they feel forced to do something which affects the mood to actually engage in the work 100%. Therefore, whatever making, whenever it comes to work, they just prefer. Going.
✓ Because they feel restricted and forced to do something, their mood is affected, so they cannot fully engage in the work. Therefore, when it comes to work, they just prefer not to make lists.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The phrase 'whatever making, whenever it comes to work, they just prefer. Going.' is incomplete and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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