Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I do. Because when we go to the shop. Not please. We have a long time for do everything in the shop when I have a list is good and I can direct.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes I do, because then when I have at least for myself to work it easy. For about my work, because I know today what I do something tomorrow what I do. An Israeli could be hot. I can minute time.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think. Is some people. The light making list be caught it difficult for. Day. Some people don't like IS. A little.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
For me. IP first make a list on paper because I liked a picture when my pin touch with paper is very good I think is. I can memory any.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือซ้ำซ้อน เช่น คำว่า 'Not please' และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่ายขึ้น
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I can quickly find what I need without forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือผิดความหมาย เช่น 'An Israeli could be hot' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้สมเหตุสมผล
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For instance, I know exactly what to do today and what to do tomorrow, which saves me time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์ ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่สมเหตุสมผล เช่น 'The light making list be caught it difficult for' ควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือผิดความหมาย เช่น 'IP first' และ 'I can memory any' ควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because I like the feeling of writing with a pen. It also helps me remember things better than using my phone.
× Because when we go to the shop.
✓ Because when we go to the shop,
This is a sentence fragment; it lacks a main clause. It should be connected to the following sentence or completed to form a full sentence.
× Not please.
✓ Not really.
'Not please' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'Not really' to express disagreement or negation politely.
× We have a long time for do everything in the shop when I have a list is good and I can direct.
✓ We have a long time to do everything in the shop. When I have a list, it is good and I can be direct.
Incorrect verb form 'for do' should be 'to do'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. Also, 'I can direct' is unclear; 'I can be direct' or 'I can go directly' is better.
× Yes I do, because then when I have at least for myself to work it easy.
✓ Yes, I do, because when I have at least a list for myself, work is easy.
The phrase 'have at least for myself to work it easy' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'have at least a list for myself, work is easy' to convey the intended meaning.
× For about my work, because I know today what I do something tomorrow what I do.
✓ About my work, I know today what I do and tomorrow what I will do.
The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions. 'What I do something tomorrow what I do' is incorrect; it should be 'what I do and tomorrow what I will do'.
× An Israeli could be hot.
✓ An Israeli could be hot.
This sentence is unclear and possibly irrelevant. It may be a mispronunciation or error. Without context, correction is not possible.
× I can minute time.
✓ I can save time.
'I can minute time' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I can save time' or 'I can manage time better'.
× I think. Is some people.
✓ I think some people
'Is some people' is incorrect; 'some people' is plural and does not need 'is'. The sentence should be 'I think some people'.
× The light making list be caught it difficult for.
✓ They find making lists difficult.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'The light making list be caught it difficult for' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper subject and verb agreement and clearer expression.
× Some people don't like IS.
✓ Some people don't like it.
'IS' is incorrect here; the pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to 'making lists'.
× A little.
✓ A little.
This fragment is unclear and incomplete. Possibly intended as 'a little' but needs context to be a full sentence.
× For me. IP first make a list on paper because I liked a picture when my pin touch with paper is very good I think is.
✓ For me, I first make a list on paper because I like the feeling when my pen touches the paper. I think it is very good.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors such as 'IP' instead of 'I', 'liked' instead of 'like', 'pin' instead of 'pen', and awkward phrasing. The correction improves clarity and grammar.
× I can memory any.
✓ I can remember everything.
'I can memory any' is incorrect; 'memory' is a noun, the verb 'remember' should be used instead.