List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, provide specific details about how you use the list when shopping. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, so I didn't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more organized and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list of tasks for my work every night. This method works well because it helps me remember important things I need to do the next day, so I stay organized and efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists. Use linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down. However, I prefer making lists because it helps me organize my tasks better and avoid forgetting important things.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your reasons and provide more specific details about your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because sometimes my phone runs out of battery, and then I can't access my list. Also, writing things down helps me remember them better.

× When I'm going to shopping, I have.

✓ When I'm going shopping, I have.

The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. This is a common pattern in English where 'go' is followed by an activity in the -ing form without 'to'.

× I check my list, but I need That's because if I don't write on my list I will forget everything.

✓ I check my list because if I don't write on my list, I will forget everything.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an incomplete phrase 'but I need That's because'. It should be combined properly to express the cause-effect relationship. Also, a comma is needed before 'I will forget' to separate clauses.

× Sometimes I were shopping an when I came at home I.

✓ Sometimes I was shopping and when I came home, I...

The past tense of 'be' for first person singular is 'was', not 'were'. Also, 'an' is likely a typo for 'and'. The phrase 'came at home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'came home'. The sentence is incomplete and should be finished for clarity.

× What should I do tomorrow? Yes, I do.

✓ I make a list of what I should do tomorrow. Yes, I do.

The original sentence is fragmented and does not clearly answer the question. The correction provides a complete and clear response.

× Because if I don't make a list the day tomorrow, the day after the night, I forget some important things to do which I don't want to.

✓ Because if I don't make a list for tomorrow or the day after, I forget some important things to do which I don't want to forget.

The phrase 'the day tomorrow, the day after the night' is confusing and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'for tomorrow or the day after'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed clarification.

× Some people are sure they don't forget anything to do, that's why they don't make less.

✓ Some people are sure they don't forget anything to do, that's why they don't make lists.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. 'Less' is a quantifier used with uncountable nouns, not countable nouns like 'list'.

× I pray for to make a less.

✓ I prefer to make a list.

The phrase 'I pray for to make a less' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I prefer to make a list'. 'Pray for to make' is not a correct English construction.

× That's why hi how I remember the things to do after the.

✓ That's how I remember the things to do afterwards.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'hi'. It should be corrected to a clear and complete sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because if I write it on my phone, maybe my phone has no charge more and I can't see my list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because if I write it on my phone, maybe my phone will run out of charge and I can't see my list.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'has no charge more' is awkward; 'will run out of charge' is more natural.

× An when I'm writing on the paper I can't remember it and memorize it too.

✓ And when I'm writing on paper, I can remember and memorize it too.

The sentence starts with 'An' which is a typo for 'And'. Also, the original sentence says 'I can't remember it', which contradicts the intended meaning. It should be 'I can remember and memorize it'. The phrase 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'.