List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary pauses and filler words, and try to combine sentences for better flow. Also, clarify your points with linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the mall or grocery store because it helps me remember the things I need to buy. However, I sometimes end up buying extra items due to markdowns or special offers.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using smoother sentence structures and linking words. Also, try to avoid fragmented sentences and explain your points more clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I keep a notebook where I list my tasks and schedule the time to complete them. However, I often struggle to follow the schedule because I tend to procrastinate.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically. Avoid negative or confusing phrasing.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because plans often don't go as expected, so they feel it's better not to make a list or plan their tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and coherent. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer to write my lists on paper because I like the physical act of writing. However, I find it hard to stick to the schedule since I prefer to stay flexible and adjust my plans as needed.

× Because it's it helps me remember this the things that I need to buy.

✓ Because it helps me remember the things that I need to buy.

The sentence contains redundant pronouns 'it's it' and an unnecessary demonstrative 'this' before 'the things'. Removing the extra 'it' and 'this' clarifies the sentence and corrects the pronoun usage.

× However I end up. Buying some extra stuff because of the. Markdown items.

✓ However, I end up buying some extra stuff because of the markdown items.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods breaking the flow. Combining the fragments into one sentence with proper punctuation improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I make a shopping list before going to a mall or grocery store.

✓ I make a shopping list before going to the mall or grocery store.

When referring to a specific place like 'mall' or 'grocery store' in a general context, the definite article 'the' is used instead of 'a'. This corrects the preposition and article usage.

× I actually have a notebook where I make a list of the work that I do and the schedule or the time that I have to. Execute the work.

✓ I actually have a notebook where I make a list of the work that I do and the schedule or the time that I have to execute the work.

The sentence is broken unnecessarily by a period before 'Execute'. Removing the period and keeping the sentence continuous corrects the structure and preposition usage.

× Well, I think it's because when you plan something, it usually ends up off. Not following it, so if you're going to ask me, it's better not to. Make a plan or list the things that you have to do.

✓ Well, I think it's because when you plan something, it usually ends up not being followed, so if you're going to ask me, it's better not to make a plan or list the things that you have to do.

The phrase 'ends up off. Not following it' is incorrect and fragmented. Replacing it with 'ends up not being followed' corrects the preposition and verb form, and removing unnecessary periods improves sentence flow.

× I'm I'm a type of person who likes to write down the things that I would like to do. But. As I have said before, it's difficult for me to follow the schedule.

✓ I'm a type of person who likes to write down the things that I would like to do, but as I have said before, it's difficult for me to follow the schedule.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods breaking the flow. Combining the fragments into one sentence with proper punctuation improves clarity and sentence structure.