List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý sửa lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng ("traditional story" nên là "traditional store") và tránh lặp từ ("remember all the ingredients we need and avoid forgetting anything important" có thể gọn hơn). Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I usually make a shopping list when I go to a shopping center with my mom, especially if we visit a traditional store. This is essential because it helps me remember all the ingredients we need, so I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "particularly working on me" không chính xác, nên dùng "particularly effective for me". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có lỗi về số nhiều/số ít ("task" nên là "tasks"). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. I usually use a digital calendar on my computer to list both professional and personal activities daily. I find it particularly effective for me because it helps improve my organizational skills and reminds me of urgent important tasks that require more time and energy.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "fill that list" không đúng, nên là "making a list". Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: I think the main reason is that some people find it difficult to stay organized. For example, they prefer to be spontaneous, and making a list can limit their freedom. Moreover, if people don't have specific goals or targets, they usually don't make lists.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ "which is attached to the artificial intelligence functions" nên là "which has artificial intelligence features" và "paper list can be easily lossed" nên là "paper lists can be easily lost". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và cần dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer to make lists on my computer, especially because it has artificial intelligence features. This not only helps me stay on track with important deadlines and appointments but also stores important information. On the other hand, paper lists can be easily lost for unknown reasons.

× I usually make a shopping list when I go to a shopping center with my mom, especially if we visit a traditional story inside.

✓ I usually make a shopping list when I go to a shopping center with my mom, especially if we visit a traditional store inside.

The word 'story' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'store' which means a place where goods are sold. 'Story' refers to a narrative or a level of a building, so it is a wrong word choice here.

× I find it particularly working on me because it not only helps me improve my organizational skills but also remind me of urgent important task that I need to put more time and energy on.

✓ I find it particularly effective for me because it not only helps me improve my organizational skills but also reminds me of urgent important tasks that I need to put more time and energy into.

The phrase 'find it particularly working on me' is incorrect; 'working' should not be used here. Instead, use 'effective for me' or 'helpful to me'. Also, 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items. The preposition 'on' at the end should be 'into' to correctly express putting time and energy into tasks.

× I find it particularly working on me because it not only helps me improve my organizational skills but also remind me of urgent important task that I need to put more time and energy on.

✓ I find it particularly effective for me because it not only helps me improve my organizational skills but also reminds me of urgent important tasks that I need to put more time and energy into.

The preposition 'on' at the end of the sentence is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'into' when talking about investing time and energy in something.

× some people prefer it to be spontaneous and fill that list can limit their freedom.

✓ some people prefer to be spontaneous and feel that making a list can limit their freedom.

The phrase 'prefer it to be spontaneous' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be spontaneous'. Also, 'fill that list' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'feel that making a list'. The pronoun 'that' is used incorrectly here.

× And in addition, if people don't have any specific goals and targets, they will not make a list for them.

✓ And in addition, if people don't have any specific goals and targets, they will not make a list for themselves.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here because it refers to 'goals and targets' which are not the ones making the list. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' referring back to 'people'.

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my computer especially which is attached to the artificial intelligence functions because it not only helps me stay on track with important deadlines and appointments, but also retains several important information.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my computer, especially one that is equipped with artificial intelligence functions because it not only helps me stay on track with important deadlines and appointments, but also retains several important pieces of information.

The phrase 'especially which is attached to the artificial intelligence functions' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'especially one that is equipped with artificial intelligence functions'. Also, 'retains several important information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; it should be 'several important pieces of information'.

× Otherwise, paper list can be easily lossed for unknown reasons.

✓ Otherwise, paper lists can be easily lost for unknown reasons.

'Paper list' should be plural 'paper lists' to generalize the statement. The word 'lossed' is incorrect; the correct past participle of 'lose' is 'lost'.