Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I like singing because singing makes me more active and enjoy my life especially after hardworking I I listen to music with singing. Yes, it makes me more energetic so I enjoyed that.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I haven't even learned how to sing so I don't know the specific process in singing bird I just enjoying the rowding with his song and enjoy the atmosphere
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
And sometimes I want to inform my mum and father to express my thanks to them When I if I have opportunity to sing I sing full down
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because Singing harmonic singing energized people more and after a stressful day, people would like to sing a song.
Examinador
Do you like listening to others singing?
Candidato
Yes, I like listening to other singing. So for example, when I focus on my experiment, I usually listen to sing to sync two operate to my mode.
Examinador
Have you ever taken a singing class?
Candidato
No, actually I've never taken a singing class because I'm not interested in professional singing so I don't feel the needs for taking a class I just enjoy singing for myself and listening to other songs.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly in the first sentence, then give one clear reason and a specific situation. Avoid repetition such as “singing” and “enjoy,” and correct the grammar: say “after a hard day’s work,” “it makes me feel more energetic,” and “I enjoy it.” Keep the answer fluent and organized instead of restarting the sentence.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Singing helps me relax and makes me feel more energetic, especially after a hard day’s work. I often sing along to my favorite songs in the evening, and it puts me in a better mood.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Use the correct tense and structure: “No, I haven’t learned how to sing.” The phrase “singing bird” is unclear and should be replaced with a relevant explanation, such as singing along with songs or enjoying other people’s singing. Give a direct reason and avoid unclear expressions like “the rowding with his song.”
Ejemplo: No, I haven’t learned how to sing formally. I don’t know much about vocal techniques, such as breathing or controlling my pitch. Instead, I simply sing along with songs at home because I enjoy the atmosphere.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer instead of “And sometimes.” Use “my parents” or “my mother and father,” and say “express my gratitude” rather than “inform ... to express my thanks.” Explain when you would sing for them, and replace the unclear phrase “I sing full down” with a natural expression such as “I would sing my heart out.”
Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my parents because I want to express my gratitude to them. If I had the opportunity, I would sing a meaningful song at a family celebration. I would probably sing my heart out, even though I am not a professional singer.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Your main idea is relevant, but “singing harmonic singing energized people more” is unnatural and repetitive. Use a clear reason, such as singing helping people release stress, and support it with a specific example or result. Check agreement and phrasing: say “it energizes people” and “after a stressful day, they may sing to relax.”
Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can make people happier because it helps them release stress and express their emotions. For example, after a stressful day, people may sing along to their favorite songs, which can help them relax and feel more positive.
Do you like listening to others singing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Correct the noun form: say “listening to other people sing” or “listening to others singing.” The second sentence is difficult to understand, so clearly explain when and why you listen to singing. Replace “sync two operate to my mode” with “put me in a good mood” or “help me concentrate,” depending on your meaning.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy listening to other people sing because their voices can be very relaxing. For example, when I am working on an experiment, I often listen to soft music with vocals because it helps me concentrate and puts me in a good mood.
Have you ever taken a singing class?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: This answer is relevant and gives a clear reason, but improve the grammar and linking. Say “I don’t feel the need to take a class,” not “the needs for taking a class.” Divide the long sentence into shorter sentences and add a specific detail about how you enjoy singing casually.
Ejemplo: No, I have never taken a singing class. I am not interested in becoming a professional singer, so I have never felt the need to take formal lessons. I just enjoy singing casually at home and listening to other people’s songs.
× Yes, I like singing because singing makes me more active and enjoy my life especially after hardworking.
✓ Yes, I like singing because singing makes me more active and helps me enjoy my life, especially after working hard.
Hardworking is an adjective used to describe a person, not an activity. Use the adverbial expression working hard after the preposition after. The verb helps is also needed to connect singing with the second idea correctly.
× I enjoyed that.
✓ I enjoy it.
The question asks about your general opinion, so use the present tense. Use enjoy rather than enjoyed, and use the pronoun it to refer to singing.
× I listen to music with singing.
✓ I listen to music while singing.
Use while singing to describe two actions happening at the same time. With singing does not express this meaning naturally.
× No, I haven't even learned how to sing so I don't know the specific process in singing bird.
✓ No, I haven't even learned how to sing, so I don't know the specific process of singing like a bird.
Use the preposition of before a gerund phrase when referring to a process. Also, use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bird.
× I just enjoying the rowding with his song and enjoy the atmosphere.
✓ I just enjoy the rhythm of his song and the atmosphere.
After the subject I, use the base form enjoy in the present simple, not enjoying. The present simple is appropriate because this describes a general preference.
× If I have opportunity to sing, I sing full down.
✓ If I have an opportunity to sing, I sing wholeheartedly.
Opportunity is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article an. The first conditional uses the present simple after if and in the main clause. Wholeheartedly is the appropriate adverbial form for describing how you sing.
× Singing harmonic singing energized people more.
✓ Singing harmoniously energizes people.
Harmonic is an adjective, but an adverb is needed to describe how people sing; therefore, use harmoniously. The sentence has a singular subject, singing, so energizes is required.
× Singing harmonic singing energized people more.
✓ Singing harmoniously energizes people.
Singing is a gerund used as a singular subject, so it must take the singular verb energizes, not energized. The present tense is also suitable for a general statement.
× After a stressful day, people would like to sing a song.
✓ After a stressful day, people like to sing a song.
The article a is correctly used before the singular countable noun day. The present simple like is more appropriate than would like because the sentence describes people's general behavior.
× Yes, I like listening to other singing.
✓ Yes, I like listening to other people singing.
Other must refer to people in this sentence. Use the noun phrase other people before the present participle singing.
× I usually listen to sing to sync two operate to my mode.
✓ I usually listen to people singing to improve my mood.
After listen to, use a noun or an -ing form to describe what you hear. Therefore, use people singing rather than listen to sing. The phrase improve my mood correctly expresses the purpose.
× I don't feel the needs for taking a class.
✓ I don't feel the need to take a class.
Need is singular because it follows the singular noun phrase the need. The standard structure is feel the need to do something, so use to take rather than for taking.
× I just enjoy singing for myself and listening to other songs.
✓ I just enjoy singing for myself and listening to other people sing.
Other songs changes the meaning to listening to songs. To express listening to people who are singing, use the object phrase other people followed by the bare infinitive sing after listening to.