Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn; trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ lặp và sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ "last again", "sound"). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget the stress after a long day. For example, I often sing along to my favorite songs at home with friends when we meet, and it always makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: Cần cải thiện cấu trúc thì (tense) và diễn đạt mạch lạc; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề về việc học hát rồi nêu thời điểm và chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Tránh tiếng lắp và lỗi từ (ví dụ "when I was born" => "when I was... years old", "music pain" => "music club").

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. When I was at school, I joined the music club and took singing lessons for about a year. We practised vocal exercises, songs, and breathing techniques, and I still sing sometimes with my friends.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng nên rút gọn cho tự nhiên và sửa lỗi nhỏ về trật tự từ ("at the after the meal"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu một ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ như "because" và "so" để kết nối.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and make me feel confident. For example, I often sing after meals during family gatherings, and everyone enjoys it and sometimes joins in.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số động từ, thì) và dùng câu kết luận rõ ràng. Bổ sung liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Tránh các từ không rõ nghĩa ("I can").

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and reduces stress after work or study. For example, when I sing with friends at karaoke, we laugh a lot and feel closer to each other.

Sugerencia: Cần chỉnh câu chủ đề và dùng từ vựng phù hợp ("listening to others sing" not "singing to other people say"). Tập dùng cụm danh từ đúng và nối câu bằng các linking words như "for example" hoặc "also".

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing because their performances can be relaxing and emotional. For example, I often watch live performances on YouTube and enjoy listening to my friends sing at karaoke.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp; trả lời trực tiếp về khóa học, nêu thời gian, nơi và lợi ích cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng lắp. Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng: "Yes, I took... It helped me..."

Ejemplo: Yes, I took a singing class at my school last year. It helped me improve my breathing and vocal control, and I enjoyed it because it made me feel relaxed and motivated to develop my skills further.

× Well yes, I last again because it helped me relax and forget stress after a long day.

✓ Well yes, I sing again because it helps me relax and forget stress after a long day.

The original mixes tenses and uses 'last' incorrectly. Use present simple 'sing' and 'helps' to express habitual actions. Suggestion: use present simple for repeated habits and ensure subject-verb agreement (it helps).

× For example, I often sing along to sound at home with with my friends when we meet and it made me feel happy.

✓ For example, I often sing along to songs at home with my friends when we meet and it makes me feel happy.

Use the correct noun 'songs' not 'sound' and preposition 'sing along to' with plural 'songs'. Maintain present tense 'makes' for habitual effects. Remove duplicate 'with'.

× Umm, well, I, yes, I learn singing When I was born, I joined the club, uh, they called the music pain in my school.

✓ Umm, well, yes, I learned to sing. When I was young, I joined a club they called the music band at my school.

Use past tense 'learned' for completed past action. 'When I was born' is incorrect for learning; use 'young'. 'Music band' is the correct term. 'Pain' is a typo. Use article 'a club'.

× And for example, we, we practice reading, exercise and also the simple sound and I still sing sometimes with my friends.

✓ For example, we practiced breathing exercises and simple vocal exercises, and I still sometimes sing with my friends.

Clarify intended activities: 'breathing exercises' and 'vocal exercises'. Use past tense 'practiced' for past class, and improve word order 'still sometimes sing'.

× It very.

✓ It was very helpful.

Fragment 'It very.' lacks a verb and adjective. Complete the sentence with a verb and adjective 'was very helpful' to convey meaning.

× For example, I often sing at home during my family gathering at the after the meal and everyone will enjoy it and sing with me.

✓ For example, I often sing at home during family gatherings after the meal and everyone enjoys it and sings with me.

Use plural 'gatherings' and correct phrase order 'after the meal' -> 'after the meal' or 'after meals'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'enjoys' and 'sings' for subject-verb agreement.

× Well I can. Singing can bring happiness to people because it help them to relax and reduce the stress after studying or work.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and reduce stress after studying or work.

Remove fragment 'Well I can.' Use 'helps' for subject-verb agreement and remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help'. Use 'reduce stress' without 'the'.

× For example when I say with my friends at karaoke, we laugh a lot and feel closer so.

✓ For example, when I sing with my friends at karaoke, we laugh a lot and feel closer.

Correct verb 'sing' instead of 'say'. Remove trailing 'so'. Use comma after 'For example'. Maintain present tense for habitual events.

× Well, yes, I like singing to other people say, because it's very relaxed and emotional.

✓ Well, yes, I like listening to other people sing, because it's very relaxing and emotional.

Use 'listening to other people sing' not 'singing to other people say'. Use adjective 'relaxing' to describe an activity. Ensure word order correct.

× For example, I often watch live performance on YouTube and also I enjoy listening with my friends sing at karaoke.

✓ For example, I often watch live performances on YouTube and I also enjoy listening to my friends sing at karaoke.

Use plural 'performances', and correct preposition 'listening to my friends sing'. Maintain parallel structure.

× Yes, I took a single glass, uh, at the singing Block music singer love at the school last year.

✓ Yes, I took a singing class at the school's singing club last year.

Correct nouns: 'singing class' and 'singing club'. Use past tense 'took' is fine; restructure phrase to be natural and clear.

× It helped me to read the Japanese and controlling bits.

✓ It helped me with breath control and vocal techniques.

Original is unclear and uses wrong words 'read the Japanese' and 'controlling bits'. Replace with 'breath control' and 'vocal techniques' to convey likely meaning.

× And I enjoy its son because it's made me feel relaxed and I want to, uh, develop my personal skill.

✓ And I enjoyed it because it made me feel relaxed and I want to develop my personal skills.

Use correct pronoun 'it' and past tense 'enjoyed'/'made' for completed class. Use plural 'skills' and remove unnecessary filler. Ensure tense consistency.