Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và trôi chảy. Trả lời cần rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề, tránh lặp từ, sử dụng cấu trúc ngắn gọn (1–3 câu). Chú ý thì động từ và mạo từ, ví dụ: "Yes, I enjoy singing because it relaxes me and makes me happy." Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn về hoàn cảnh bạn thường hát.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it relaxes me and makes me feel happy. For example, I often sing my favorite pop songs at home while cooking, which helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính logic và dùng từ chính xác. Trả lời với câu chủ đề rồi nêu lí do và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi lặp và sai từ (learned/learnt, tutorials, performances).

Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch tutorials and performances on YouTube to learn techniques. For instance, I follow a vocal coach's channel to practice breathing exercises.

Sugerencia: Rèn cấu trúc câu mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, trật tự từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lí do ngắn gọn. Tránh các cụm như "helps me less feel less nervous"; dùng "helps me feel less nervous".

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for my family and close friends because I feel more comfortable with them. Singing in front of people I know helps me feel less nervous and allows me to enjoy the moment.

Sugerencia: Chú ý mệnh đề và dùng từ phù hợp (help people be happy, live performances, special events). Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể, tránh từ sai ('fresh festival', 'hide popular singles').

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because live performances at special events create a joyful atmosphere. For example, at weddings and local festivals, popular songs often encourage guests to sing along and celebrate.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện phát âm và từ vựng; tránh các lỗi như 'wait for listening', 'saying', 'voicemail'. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lí do ngắn gọn và ví dụ rõ ràng về cảm xúc bạn nhận được.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing, especially my idols and close friends, because their voices are inspiring. For example, when my sister sings at family gatherings, I can feel the emotion in her voice and it moves me.

Sugerencia: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng, tránh các câu lộn xộn và từ ngữ không liên quan. Nêu câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (No, I haven't) rồi giải thích lý do (busy with studies) một cách mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và từ không rõ nghĩa.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken any formal singing classes because I focus on my academic subjects at the academy and haven't had time. Maybe in the future I will join lessons when my schedule is less busy.

× An absolutely yes.

✓ Absolutely yes.

The sentence contains an extra article 'An' before an adverb 'Absolutely'; use 'Absolutely yes' or better 'Yes, absolutely.' to answer the question directly. Use correct word order: modal reply 'Yes, absolutely.' is natural in English.

× I like I like sing sing my favorite songs.

✓ I like singing my favorite songs.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'singing' when describing a general preference. Also remove repeated words. Use 'I like singing my favorite songs.' for correct structure.

× It is very comfortable and relaxed.

✓ It is very comfortable and relaxing.

Use 'relaxing' (a present participle adjective) to describe something that causes relaxation; 'relaxed' describes a person. 'Singing is very comfortable and relaxing.' is clearer.

× I can sing everywhere and whenever because it's a very happy and relaxed.

✓ I can sing anywhere and anytime because it makes me very happy and relaxed.

Use 'anywhere' and 'anytime' rather than 'everywhere and whenever' for naturalness. Also complete the clause: 'it makes me very happy and relaxed.' ensures grammatical completeness.

× I haven't learned to sing.

✓ I haven't learned to sing yet.

Add 'yet' to indicate up to now the action hasn't occurred. The present perfect 'haven't learned' is correct but sounds more natural with 'yet'.

× I usually watch singing to to tutorials and performance on YouTube and on social media because I don't consider myself good at it and I've never taken formal action.

✓ I usually watch singing tutorials and performances on YouTube and social media because I don't consider myself good at it and I've never taken formal lessons.

Remove the extra 'to' and use plural 'performances'. Use 'lessons' rather than 'action' to refer to formal instruction. Prepositions adjusted: 'on YouTube and social media.'

× I'd like to sing for my family and close friends since I am not confident speaking English in front of strangers.

✓ I'd like to sing for my family and close friends because I'm not confident speaking English in front of strangers.

Use 'because' for a straightforward causal link; contraction 'I'm' is natural. Pronouns are fine; change 'since' to 'because' for clarity in spoken context.

× Singing for people and just helps me less feel less nervous and makes me enjoy the moment more.

✓ Singing for people helps me feel less nervous and makes me enjoy the moment more.

Remove extraneous words 'and just' and correct word order 'helps me feel less nervous.' The gerund phrase 'Singing for people' is the subject; follow with correct verb structure.

× Yes, I think singing can help people happy because live performance at a special events create a joyful atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I think singing can help people be happy because live performances at special events create a joyful atmosphere.

The verb 'help' requires 'be happy' or 'make people happy.' Use plural 'performances' and 'special events.' Subject-verb agreement corrected: 'performances create.'

× For example, weddings and a fresh festival often hide popular singles and their songs have gone guest feel.

✓ For example, weddings and music festivals often feature popular singles whose songs make guests feel joyful.

Original sentence is unclear and has wrong article and word choices. Use 'music festivals' not 'fresh festival.' Use 'feature' and 'whose songs make guests feel' for clear meaning.

× Yes, I wait for listening to other people saying, especially my idols and close friends because they are very talented and their voice is inspiring.

✓ Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing, especially my idols and close friends, because they are very talented and their voices are inspiring.

Use 'enjoy listening to' and the base verb 'sing' after 'listening to.' Correct plural 'voices.' Remove 'wait for' which is incorrect here.

× Voicemail When my family performs a small gift, I enjoy the emotion in her.

✓ When my family performs at small events, I enjoy the emotion in their performances.

Original sentence is incoherent. Replace 'Voicemail' and 'small gift' with 'small events' and use possessive 'their performances.' 'I enjoy the emotion' describes the speaker's feeling.

× I haven't taken a singing class at university, I study at an Academy and I focus on Academy subjects so I haven't had time to to actually cook.

✓ I haven't taken a singing class at university; I study at an academy and focus on academic subjects, so I haven't had time to actually do so.

Use semicolon or separate sentences. Fix capitalization 'academy' and 'academic.' Remove duplicated 'to' and replace 'cook' with 'do so' or 'take lessons.' 'Haven't had time' is present perfect and appropriate.

× Exactly. Cooler singing, classy lesson. Singing isn't really really hot.

✓ Exactly. Singing lessons aren't that popular here, and singing isn't very trendy.

Rephrase to coherent expressions: 'aren't that popular' and 'isn't very trendy.' Remove repeated words and unclear adjectives 'cooler classy.'