Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答总体表达清楚但存在重复、填充词（如 uh, like）较多，句子结构有些冗长且有代词使用不当（yourselves 应为 yourself/yourself）。建议：1) 去掉多余的填充词，保持流畅；2) 开头用一句主题句直接回答，再用一到两句具体原因支持；3) 注意代词准确性和主谓一致；4) 控制在最多五句内。示例结构：I like singing because...; For example,...

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and unwind. For example, when I’m at home I often sing aloud in my room to relieve stress and lift my mood.

Sugerencia: 回答直接但不够自然流畅，出现多余填充词（uh）和重复（learn/learnt）。建议：1) 使用更自然的短句表达自学经历；2) 给出一两个具体细节说明为何不参加课程（如时间、兴趣或目标）；3) 控制句子长度并使用连接词使逻辑清晰。

Ejemplo: No, I’m self-taught and haven’t taken formal lessons because I sing mainly for fun and don’t feel the need for professional training. I practice by watching online tutorials and singing along to my favorite songs.

Sugerencia: 内容有趣但语气不够自然，重复“like/so/uh”过多，夸张自夸（my beautiful voice）显得不够得体。建议：1) 开门见山回答目标对象；2) 用一两句说明场景或原因，避免自夸或过多语气词；3) 使用连接词保持连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually sing for my friends, especially at gatherings or karaoke nights, because we enjoy performing and cheering each other on.

Sugerencia: 回答肯定且给出例子，但表达较重复且有语法和用词问题（I will like very appreciate them）。建议：1) 避免重复肯定句，直接给原因和例子；2) 使用正确的动词短语（e.g. I really appreciate them）；3) 增加更具体的情感描述以增强说服力。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because music can soothe emotions and create shared joy. For example, when my favorite singers perform, their songs lift my mood and make me feel comforted.

Sugerencia: 回答表达意图清楚但句子结构混乱、语法错误较多（they were they did a lot...），且有填充词。建议：1) 先给直接回答，然后用一两句清楚描述原因；2) 简化句子，修正语法；3) 尽量提供具体细节（如舞台表现、情感影响）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing, especially my idols. Watching them perform on a big stage impresses me because of their hard work and the energy they share with the audience.

Sugerencia: 回答直接但重复且语言不够简洁（重复表述“singing at home”/“not professional”）。建议：1) 简洁说明没有上过课并给出原因；2) 提供替代学习方式或未来计划以丰富内容；3) 使用更自然的表达，如 casually/for fun。

Ejemplo: No, I haven’t taken any singing classes because I sing casually at home for fun. Instead, I practice by recording myself and learning from online videos.

× Yes, I'm definitely, uh, very into singing because I think that singing helps me to express my thoughts and, uh, emotions.

✓ Yes, I'm definitely very into singing because I think singing helps me express my thoughts and emotions.

句中“definitely, uh, very into”有多余填充词且“helps me to express”可以简化为“helps me express”。建议去掉口语填充词“uh”，合并副词位置，保持表达简洁自然。

× And I think it's a very good way to relax yourselves because you can just sing it aloud without anyone noticing in your room.

✓ And I think it's a very good way to relax yourself because you can just sing aloud in your room without anyone noticing.

原句中“relax yourselves”与主语不一致，且“sing it aloud”中多余“it”。把代词改为单数“yourself”，把“aloud”的位置前移并去掉“it”，使语序更自然。

× So I appreciate like singing.

✓ So I appreciate singing.

“appreciate like singing”中“like”是多余的填充词，删除可使句子更准确简洁。

× No, uh, I only learnt uh by self-taught because I am not a very professional singer, so I do not think that I have the urge to take singing lessons.

✓ No, I only learned by teaching myself because I'm not a professional singer, so I don't think I have the urge to take singing lessons.

“learnt by self-taught”结构错误。要么用“learned”+“by myself”或“self-taught”作形容词。将“learnt by self-taught”改为“learned by teaching myself”或“self-taught”。同时将时态和缩写统一为口语形式。

× I would like to sing for my friends because like for gatherings we usually go to the karaoke and sing together.

✓ I would like to sing for my friends because, at gatherings, we usually go to karaoke and sing together.

“for gatherings”用法不自然，通常说“at gatherings”。去掉多余的“like”，并将“the karaoke”改为不可数名词“karaoke”。

× So they are like the first ones to hear my voice, my beautiful voice.

✓ So they are usually the first ones to hear my voice — my beautiful voice.

“are like the first ones”中的“like”为口语填充，应删除以显得更正式。可加“usually”表频率。

× Yes, definitely. I would say singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would say that singing can bring happiness to people.

在正式语境中，习惯在“say”后加“that”。不是必须但更完整、更正式，保持语法一致性。

× For example, like for the idols when they sing and I will like very appreciate them because they have such a beautiful voice and also it's very soothing to hear from them.

✓ For example, when idols sing, I really appreciate them because they have such beautiful voices and it's very soothing to hear them.

原句含多处问题：多余填充词“like”、“I will like very appreciate”；“a beautiful voice”应与可数名词复数“voices”一致（指多个偶像各自的声音）或改为“their beautiful singing”。去掉“from”并调整词序使句子更自然。

× Yes, definitely. Especially for my idols, I think that watching them perform on the stage, the uh, it's very happy because I think they were they did a lot to stand on the stage that is real big and perform before.

✓ Yes, definitely. Especially for my idols — I think watching them perform on stage makes me very happy because I think they work hard to get on such a big stage and perform.

原句中“on the stage”与“perform before”不自然，重复且语序混乱。将“on the stage”改为“on stage”，删除多余填充词，使用“makes me very happy”表达感受，改正时态和结构使语义明确。

× No, because I am only singing in my house very casually instead of professional, so I usually just sing aloud at my house instead of performing very professionally.

✓ No, because I only sing casually at home rather than professionally, so I usually just sing aloud at home instead of performing professionally.

“am only singing”改为一般现在时“only sing”更符合习惯；“in my house”改为更自然的“at home”；“instead of professional”应为“rather than professionally”或“instead of performing professionally”。调整副词位置和词类以保证语法正确。