Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议回答时注意句子完整性和语法正确，避免重复表达，同时用简洁的句子表达原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happier after a long day.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达时注意逻辑清晰，避免拼写错误。

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some basic techniques by watching short videos on social media platforms like TikTok.

Sugerencia: 回答较长且有语法和表达问题，建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意句子结构和用词准确。

Ejemplo: I usually prefer to sing alone because I am quite shy and feel more comfortable singing by myself.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，表达观点时要具体且连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to relaxing music often makes people feel joyful and calm.

× I'm very into the.

✓ I'm very into singing.

句子中缺少动名词形式的宾语，'into'后面应接动名词，表示喜欢某事。

× I'm really into the.

✓ I'm really into singing.

同上，'into'后应接动名词，表示对唱歌的喜爱。

× Because singing can makes me can make me feel more happy and relax.

✓ Because singing can make me feel happier and more relaxed.

情态动词'can'后应接动词原形，不能用第三人称单数形式'makes'。此外，'happy'和'relax'应使用比较级'happier'和形容词'relaxed'。

× Because the. You know the reason? The ring.

✓ Because of that. You know the reason? The ring.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词短语，导致表达不清。应补充'Because of that'表示原因。

× Well, actually I have never formally learned how to sing but I have watched some short videos on social media platforms like doing and TikTok.

✓ Well, actually I have never formally learned how to sing but I have watched some short videos on social media platforms like Douyin and TikTok.

'doing'应为正确的专有名词'Douyin'，不是时态错误，但属于拼写错误，因不在语法问题列表中不做改正。

× TikTok and Bill ability on such short videos would teach you some small scales on this small techniques.

✓ TikTok and Bilibili short videos teach you some small scales and techniques.

介词'on'使用错误，且句子结构混乱，应简化表达。

× Well actually I have never thought about this question because I don't want to sing for anyone because UM my correct character is quite shy so I want to sing along because this makes me feel more comfortable and relax and besides I have not many friends so I don't have the chance to.

✓ Well, actually I have never thought about this question because I don't want to sing for anyone. My character is quite shy, so I want to sing alone because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed. Besides, I don't have many friends, so I don't have the chance to.

代词使用不当，句子过长且缺少标点，导致表达不清。应分句并使用正确代词。

× Definitely singing camp bring the.

✓ Definitely singing can bring the feeling of happiness to people.

'camp'应为情态动词'can'，且主谓不一致，'singing can bring'为正确搭配。

× Definitely singing camp bring the. Uhm, the feeling of happiness to the human beings, because when people hear about the relaxed music, they would feel more happy and more lovely.

✓ Definitely singing can bring the feeling of happiness to human beings, because when people hear relaxing music, they feel happier and more lovely.

'the human beings'中'the'不必要，'relaxed music'应为'relaxing music'，'more happy'应为比较级'happier'。