Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên trong tiếng Anh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh những câu không liên quan và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I feel shy and my family often laughs when I sing. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in front of others.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời có nội dung phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took singing lessons at school when I was about six or seven years old. However, the classes were not very long or frequent.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời giải thích lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời có ý nghĩa hơn.

Ejemplo: If I sing, I would like to sing for my friends because it would help me feel more confident.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy cố gắng giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic cao hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because many people feel stressed from work or daily life, and singing helps them relax and feel comfortable.

× I don't like singing because I am not single.

✓ I don't like singing because I am not good at it.

The pronoun 'single' is incorrectly used here. The student likely meant 'good at singing' but used 'single' mistakenly. The sentence needs a correct pronoun or phrase to express inability or dislike.

× Wells, Ann.

✓ Well, um.

'Wells, Ann' is incorrect and unclear. The student probably intended to say 'Well, um' as a hesitation or filler word.

× my friends in my family laugh so much and they says I don't.

✓ my friends and family laugh so much and they say I don't.

The verb 'says' does not agree with the plural subject 'they'. It should be 'say'. Also, 'friends in my family' is awkward; 'friends and family' is more natural.

× I shouldn't sing yes, so I don't.

✓ I shouldn't sing, so I don't.

The word 'yes' is unnecessary and disrupts the modal verb phrase. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× Yes, when I when I watch children's, I remember about six or seven years old, I have a singing causes in my schools.

✓ Yes, when I was about six or seven years old, I had singing classes in my school.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'watch children's' is incorrect; 'remember about six or seven years old' is awkward; 'have a singing causes' is incorrect. Correct past tense forms and proper nouns are needed.

× Yes, most. It not so much so I don't know.

✓ Yes, mostly. It was not much, so I don't know.

'Most' is incorrectly used; 'mostly' fits better. Also, 'It not so much' is ungrammatical; 'It was not much' is correct.

× If I sing I want to sing for wish my friends because it make me confident in accountable to sing for which it.

✓ If I sing, I want to sing for my friends because it makes me confident and comfortable to sing for them.

The pronouns 'wish' and 'which it' are incorrect. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence needs clearer pronouns and verb agreement.

× because it make me confident in accountable to sing for which it.

✓ because it makes me confident and comfortable to sing for them.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'accountable' is incorrect here; 'comfortable' fits better.

× I yes I do because they have a lot of people.

✓ Yes, I do because many people are

The phrase 'they have a lot of people' is incorrect. The student likely meant 'many people are' or 'there are many people'.

× Are they very stressed for the work or a day so late then later they can singing to relax in comfortable.

✓ who are very stressed from work or a long day, so later they can sing to relax comfortably.

The sentence lacks proper 'there is/are' structure and has incorrect prepositions and verb forms. 'Singing' should be 'sing', 'in comfortable' should be 'comfortably'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.