Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax, especially when I am in the shower or bath. Moreover, singing makes me feel comfortable both at home and at work. However, I think my singing is not very good, but I still enjoy it.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains fragmented sentences. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases and improve grammar for better coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. Although I believe my voice is improving gradually when I sing, my husband often tells me that I do not have a very good voice.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words. Make sure sentences are complete and ideas are logically connected.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my husband in the future. Once I have practiced and improved my singing skills, I will definitely sing a love song for him because he enjoys listening to nice songs. This will make both of us very happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Use precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them connect with their emotions and express their feelings. As a result, they feel more relaxed and their mood improves throughout the day.

× I enjoy singing while I am having shower.

✓ I enjoy singing while I am having a shower.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'shower'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I enjoy singing while I am having shower.

✓ I enjoy singing while I am having a shower.

The noun 'shower' is countable and singular here, so it needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I'm in the I'm in the bath actually because it helps me to relax and feel comfort table in my place or at my workplace to.

✓ I'm in the bath actually because it helps me to relax and feel comfortable in my place or at my workplace too.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'to' at the end should be 'too' to mean 'also'.

× I'm in the I'm in the bath actually because it helps me to relax and feel comfort table in my place or at my workplace to.

✓ I'm in the bath actually because it helps me to relax and feel comfortable in my place or at my workplace too.

The phrase 'I'm in the I'm in the bath' is repetitive and incorrect. It should be 'I'm in the bath' once.

× Additionally, I feel like I am the only one who can sing really really bad in the world.

✓ Additionally, I feel like I am the only one who can sing really, really badly in the world.

The adverb form 'badly' should be used to modify the verb 'sing', not the adjective 'bad'.

× I haven't learned or practiced any kind of song actually.

✓ I haven't learned or practiced any kind of song actually.

The sentence is correct in tense; no correction needed here.

× Like have to say.

✓ I have to say.

The phrase 'Like have to say' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I have to say' to form a proper sentence.

× But The thing is I suppose that I always have a good voice and it's getting better and better and better day by day when I am singing song actually.

✓ But the thing is I suppose that I always have a good voice and it's getting better and better day by day when I am singing songs actually.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context of singing in general. Also, 'The' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence.

× But the truth is sadly not correct because my husband is just telling me oh you don't have really nice.

✓ But the truth is sadly not correct because my husband just tells me, 'Oh, you don't have a really nice voice.'

The phrase 'you don't have really nice' is incomplete and incorrect. It should specify what is 'not really nice', e.g., 'a really nice voice'. Also, verb tense adjusted to present simple 'tells' for habitual action.

× I'm pretty sure that one day I will practice on it, like singing actually.

✓ I'm pretty sure that one day I will practice it, like singing actually.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'practice' when followed by a direct object. 'Practice it' is correct.

× I'm pretty sure that one day I will practice on it, like singing actually.

✓ I'm pretty sure that one day I will practice it, like singing actually.

The verb 'practice' is transitive and does not require the preposition 'on' before its object.

× And when I learn it, definitely I will sing for my husband a love song because.

✓ And when I learn it, I will definitely sing a love song for my husband because.

The adverb 'definitely' should be placed before the main verb 'sing' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'sing for my husband a love song' is better as 'sing a love song for my husband'.

× If I have a very good voice actually an he will be quite happy and I will also be.

✓ If I have a very good voice actually, he will be quite happy and I will be too.

The pronoun 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and'. Also, 'I will also be' is incomplete; 'I will be too' is clearer.

× I believe that singing can of course bring happiness to people because when they are singing they feel like there are connected with their bodies and their feelings or maybe their suffers as well or their emotions.

✓ I believe that singing can of course bring happiness to people because when they are singing they feel like they are connected with their bodies and their feelings or maybe their sufferings as well or their emotions.

The phrase 'there are connected' is incorrect; it should be 'they are connected'. Also, 'suffers' is a verb; the noun form 'sufferings' is appropriate here.

× And I think they start, they start relaxing more and more and their day. Will be made by them self.

✓ And I think they start relaxing more and more and their day will be made by themselves.

The reflexive pronoun 'them self' is incorrect; the correct form is 'themselves'. Also, the sentence should not have a period after 'day'.