Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using proper linking words. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and thoughts. I especially like singing Hindi songs and some romantic ballads, as they often convey deep feelings and stories.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid confusing or unrelated phrases and improve grammar for better clarity.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons. However, I enjoy singing casually as a way to relax and express my creativity without any pressure.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using clearer linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific examples with proper connectors to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my husband because it lifts his spirits when he's feeling down. For instance, on his birthday last year, even though he was far away, I sang a special song to express my love and make the celebration more meaningful for both of us.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but could be more natural and specific. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer reasons or examples. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary to improve fluency.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness, especially when people are feeling down, as it helps uplift their spirits. For example, singing a cheerful song can make someone feel appreciated and improve their mood.

× Yes, I like singing be causing helps me to express my emotions and thoughts for someone.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me to express my emotions and thoughts to someone.

The phrase 'be causing' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because' to show reason. Also, 'helps me to express' requires 'it' as the subject. Additionally, 'for someone' should be 'to someone' to indicate the direction of expression.

× And you I like to sing reco Hindi and can jobbie songs which are littered through love and other genre like a triptych.

✓ And you? I like to sing Hindi and Kannada songs which are filled with love and other genres like a triptych.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'And you' should be a question. 'Reco' and 'can jobbie' seem to be misheard or misspelled; likely intended 'Hindi and Kannada'. 'Littered through love' is incorrect; 'filled with love' is appropriate. 'Genre' should be plural 'genres'. 'Triptych' is unclear in this context but kept as is.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally through singing is a common habit of most of the people to express their emotions, thoughts and creativity.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, though singing is a common habit for most people to express their emotions, thoughts, and creativity.

'Through' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'though' to indicate contrast. Also, 'most of the people' should be 'most people' for natural phrasing.

× Even though I haven't learned under tangent any professional classes.

✓ Even though I haven't taken any professional classes.

The phrase 'learned under tangent any professional classes' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'taken any professional classes' to indicate attendance.

× But it's just a form of relaxation and entertainment and brings drive without any pressure.

✓ But it's just a form of relaxation and entertainment and brings joy without any pressure.

The word 'drive' is incorrectly used here; 'joy' or 'pleasure' fits better in this context.

× I like to sing from my husband 'cause it helps to uplifting spirit whenever he's in that mood.

✓ I like to sing for my husband because it helps uplift his spirit whenever he's in that mood.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; 'for' is appropriate when indicating the beneficiary of an action. 'To uplifting' should be 'to uplift' or simply 'helps uplift'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal speech.

× For example, there on his birthday and he was far away from me, but I sang his song for him to express my love and appreciation for him and it makes the celebration are more meaningful and enjoyable for both of us.

✓ For example, on his birthday when he was far away from me, I sang a song for him to express my love and appreciation, and it made the celebration more meaningful and enjoyable for both of us.

'There on his birthday' is incorrect; 'on his birthday' is correct. 'It makes the celebration are' is ungrammatical; 'it made the celebration' matches past tense. Also, 'his song' is better as 'a song' unless a specific song is meant.

× Singing brings happiness to people especially when they are in bad mood to uplift their spirit and to appreciate them.

✓ Singing brings happiness to people, especially when they are in a bad mood, to uplift their spirits and to appreciate them.

'In bad mood' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. 'Spirit' should be plural 'spirits' to match 'people'.

× It is important to sing for them to make their life more joyable.

✓ It is important to sing for them to make their life more joyful.

'Joyable' is not a correct English word; the correct adjective is 'joyful'.

× And it helps to make feel better.

✓ And it helps them to feel better.

The sentence is missing the object 'them' after 'helps' and before 'to feel better' to be grammatically correct.