Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang menghubungkan alasan Anda menyukai bernyanyi dengan perasaan yang Anda alami.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and makes me feel happier and more relaxed.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I feel that singing comes naturally to me because it is my passion and a way to express my feelings.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih lancar dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide-ide Anda.

Ejemplo: I usually sing for myself because it makes me happy and helps me relax. Sometimes, I also sing for special people in my life to share my feelings with them.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menjelaskan pendapat Anda dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because singing happy songs and listening to music can boost our confidence and lift our spirits.

× Yes, I do like singing because singing helps me too. Express my feelings, trust singing. I can't. Be more happy and.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because singing helps me express my feelings and makes me happier.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Express my feelings, trust singing. I can't. Be more happy and.' are incomplete thoughts. The correction combines these ideas into a coherent sentence, using correct verb forms and conjunctions to express the intended meaning clearly.

× To be honest, I never learned how to sing, but I don't know, I just feel it.

✓ To be honest, I have never learned how to sing, but I don't know, I just feel it.

The use of 'never learned' is acceptable in American English, but in this context, the present perfect 'have never learned' is more appropriate to indicate an experience up to now. This tense better fits the ongoing relevance of the statement.

× It just comes with. My mind and I found it like it was. It is my passion to sing, to express my feeling on express my.

✓ It just comes to my mind, and I feel like it is my passion to sing and express my feelings.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'It just comes with. My mind and I found it like it was.' are incomplete and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I sing for myself because it makes me happy, it makes me feel more relaxed, enjoying my day.

✓ I sing for myself because it makes me happy and helps me feel more relaxed, enjoying my day.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the ideas properly. Adding 'and helps me' clarifies the relationship between the clauses and improves sentence flow.

× So I like to sing for myself and sometimes I seem for other people to anybody who special to me.

✓ So I like to sing for myself and sometimes I sing for other people, for anybody who is special to me.

The word 'seem' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'to anybody who special to me' lacks the verb 'is'. The correction fixes these pronoun and verb usage errors to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do think singing bring happiness to people because when we sing a happy song, maybe we don't realize it, but the sound of the music? No, really. Really. Lyrics can help to push our confident hope to push.

✓ Yes, I do think singing brings happiness to people because when we sing a happy song, maybe we don't realize it, but the sound of the music and lyrics can really help to boost our confidence and hope.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. The original sentence also contains fragmented and unclear parts. The correction improves subject-verb agreement and clarifies the sentence meaning.