Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I like seeing 'cause it can make me feel happy and I will seen when I have a free time I will prepare to seeing repressing alatest or our practice with my friend.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I had never heard their how to sing 'cause I always practice for myself and but sometimes if my friend have time I will practice with with her and we all like to sing but we don't have to practice about skill.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I want to sing for my mom 'cause the Mother's Day is coming and I'm practicing the song for her and my friend told me too. Give a give about the song. 2 So I practice all day. I think when I when the models they come, I can sing for my mother.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, I think it's seen can bring happiness to people 'cause seeing him make people to feel calm down and you will enjoy an enjoy our little singing and you will feel happy so. If you see if you're happy. You can practice every day and.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中有許多語法和用詞錯誤,建議你在回答時注意動詞時態和拼寫,並且保持句子簡潔且有條理。可以嘗試用簡單明確的句子表達你的喜好和原因。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy. When I have free time, I usually practice singing alone or with my friends.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答中語法錯誤較多,建議你使用正確的時態和句型,並且清楚表達你是否學過唱歌及練習的情況。避免重複和不必要的詞語。
Ejemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually practice singing by myself, but sometimes I practice with my friend when she is free.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 你的回答不夠清楚且有語法錯誤,建議你用簡單明確的句子說明你想為誰唱歌和原因,並避免不相關或重複的內容。
Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mom because Mother's Day is coming. I am practicing a song for her every day.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答中有許多語法和用詞錯誤,建議你用簡單的句子表達你的看法,並用連接詞使句子更連貫。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel calm and enjoy themselves. When people are happy, they often want to sing more.
× Yes, I like seeing 'cause it can make me feel happy and I will seen when I have a free time I will prepare to seeing repressing alatest or our practice with my friend.
✓ Yes, I like singing because it can make me feel happy and when I have free time, I will prepare to sing, rehearse latest or practice with my friend.
The verb 'seeing' is incorrectly used instead of 'singing' which is the correct gerund form related to the activity. Also, 'seen' is incorrect; it should be 'sing' to match the intended meaning. 'Prepare to seeing' should be 'prepare to sing' because after 'prepare to' the base form of the verb is used. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and article usage for clarity.
× No, I had never heard their how to sing 'cause I always practice for myself and but sometimes if my friend have time I will practice with with her and we all like to sing but we don't have to practice about skill.
✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I always practice by myself, but sometimes if my friend has time, I practice with her. We all like to sing but we don't practice skills formally.
The phrase 'had never heard their how to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'have never learned how to sing' to express experience up to now. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with 'my friend' (third person singular). 'Practice for myself' should be 'practice by myself' for correct preposition use. 'We don't have to practice about skill' is awkward; better to say 'we don't practice skills formally.'
× I want to sing for my mom 'cause the Mother's Day is coming and I'm practicing the song for her and my friend told me too. Give a give about the song. 2 So I practice all day. I think when I when the models they come, I can sing for my mother.
✓ I want to sing for my mom because Mother's Day is coming and I'm practicing a song for her. My friend told me to do the same, so I practice all day. I think when the moment comes, I can sing for my mother.
'Give a give about the song' is unclear and likely a mistranslation; replaced with 'My friend told me to do the same' for clarity. 'When the models they come' is incorrect; it should be 'when the moment comes.' Also, 'the Mother's Day' should be 'Mother's Day' without 'the.'
× Yes, I think it's seen can bring happiness to people 'cause seeing him make people to feel calm down and you will enjoy an enjoy our little singing and you will feel happy so. If you see if you're happy. You can practice every day and.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing makes people feel calm and you will enjoy our little singing and feel happy. If you are happy, you can practice every day.
'Seen' is incorrect; it should be 'singing.' 'Seeing him make people to feel calm down' is incorrect; it should be 'singing makes people feel calm.' 'Enjoy an enjoy' is redundant; corrected to 'enjoy.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.