Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially with my close friends, because it helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific details about your singing experience.

Ejemplo: I started learning how to sing when I was three years old. Since then, I have practiced regularly and tried my best to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good content. To improve, you could add a linking phrase to connect your ideas more smoothly and use a wider range of vocabulary.

Ejemplo: In recent years, I have really wanted to sing for my mom because she is the most important person in my life. By singing for her, I can express my love and appreciation for everything she has done. I believe she would feel very happy and proud if I performed a song just for her.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to connect your points clearly and provide complete, specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when a mother sings to her child, it creates a relaxing and joyful atmosphere. Moreover, singing helps people express their emotions and strengthens family bonds.

× Yes, I enjoy singing, especially with my close friends because it is expressed to me more comfortable and come and relax.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing, especially with my close friends because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'expressed to me more comfortable and come and relax'. The correct form is to say 'makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed' to express the effect of singing on the speaker's feelings. 'Come and relax' is not appropriate here; 'relaxed' is the correct adjective form.

× 1st when I was three years old. I I have been started. Singing a song. Yeah, also. I get trying my best and mastered the art of singing.

✓ First, when I was three years old, I started singing a song. Yeah, also, I tried my best and mastered the art of singing.

The original sentence has multiple tense errors and sentence fragments. 'I have been started' is incorrect; the simple past 'I started' is appropriate. 'I get trying my best' should be 'I tried my best' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, sentence fragments like '1st when I was three years old.' should be combined into a complete sentence.

× In recent years, I have really wanted to sing for my mom because she is the most important person in my life.

✓ In recent years, I have really wanted to sing to my mom because she is the most important person in my life.

The verb 'sing' is typically followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person you are singing for. Using 'sing for' can imply performing on behalf of someone, but 'sing to' is more appropriate when expressing singing directed at someone.

× Yes, I completely agree that saying in can bring capital happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'saying in' is a typo or mishearing; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'capital happiness' is incorrect; simply 'happiness' is appropriate here. The verb 'singing' is the correct gerund form to use as the subject of the clause.

× For example, when I hear a mother singing to her child, it creates a very relaxing and joyful atmosphere singing and not only helps people express their emotions but also strengthens bonds between family and.

✓ For example, when I hear a mother singing to her child, it creates a very relaxing and joyful atmosphere. Singing not only helps people express their emotions but also strengthens bonds between family members.

The original sentence is a run-on and incomplete. The phrase 'atmosphere singing and not only helps...' is confusing and ungrammatical. Splitting into two sentences clarifies meaning. Also, 'bonds between family and' is incomplete; it should be 'bonds between family members' to complete the thought.