Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel better when I am sad or frustrated. Listening to songs lifts my mood and makes me happy. For example, I enjoy listening to Lana Del Rey's songs because her voice is soothing and calming.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, explain your reasons more specifically and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have a suitable voice. People who sing usually have relaxing and calm voices, but my voice is quite harsh, so I feel singing is not for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use complete sentences. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses and filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: That's an interesting question. I have never thought about singing for someone before. However, if I had to choose, I would sing for my soulmate because it would be a beautiful way to express my feelings.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer logical and easy to understand.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people. In my experience, singing helps people express their emotions and feel better when they are frustrated or sad. Therefore, singing can improve people's mood and bring joy.

× I listened to a song which makes my mood lift an which leaves my mood up

✓ I listen to a song which makes my mood lift and which lifts my mood up

The sentence mixes past participle 'listened' with present tense 'makes' and 'leaves'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'listen' should be used to match 'makes' and 'leaves'. Also, 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'.

× I really. Love to. Hear Lana Del Rey song She's a.

✓ I really love to hear Lana Del Rey's songs. She's a great singer.

The sentence has unnecessary periods breaking the flow and missing possessive form 'Lana Del Rey's'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to generalize liking her music. Proper sentence structure improves clarity.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because it's it is not my Forte

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because it is not my forte

The phrase 'it's it is' is redundant; only one form should be used. Also, 'Forte' should be lowercase 'forte' as it is a common noun here meaning strength.

× people who sing, their voice is so relaxing, calm, serene and in my case I think my voice is so causing and it doesn't suit me

✓ people who sing have voices that are relaxing, calm, and serene, but in my case, I think my voice is harsh and it doesn't suit me

The phrase 'my voice is so causing' is incorrect; 'causing' is a verb form, not an adjective. 'Harsh' better describes an unpleasant voice. Also, 'their voice is' should be 'have voices that are' for plural subject agreement.

× there's a interesting question I have never thought. A cushion like this are. Never thought that I will. Have seen for someone but if I have to then I will definitely sing for my love of life, my soul mate A it is a beautiful thing for them

✓ That's an interesting question. I have never thought about a question like this before. I have never thought that I would sing for someone, but if I have to, then I will definitely sing for the love of my life, my soulmate. It is a beautiful thing for them.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure with proper punctuation and conjunctions improves clarity and meaning. 'A cushion like this are' is incorrect and replaced with 'a question like this'. 'Have seen for someone' is corrected to 'sing for someone'.

× People who sing a makes them. I feel what I feel in my experience, I said they are very emotional, frustrated. So this thing and.

✓ People who sing make me feel what I feel. In my experience, I find they are very emotional and frustrated sometimes.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verb forms. 'a makes them' is incorrect; it should be 'make me'. Also, 'I said' is replaced with 'I find' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for coherence.