Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, of course I like singing, especially English classical music's. The main reason I sing this kind of music is that how to improve my speaking and pronunciation.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, because in my opinion singing it is not as difficult as with thank because you just threw the next and repeat after the music like a character.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
No, I don't want to think for someone, but then when I'm alone at home I just turn on the TV and Thursday Best music, which I like to think and just thing it.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Absolutely singing can bring. To people hapiness because when they are singing they also enjoy the music.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Svarene dine bør være mer naturlige og grammatisk korrekte. Unngå unødvendige ord og vær tydelig i forklaringen. For eksempel, si "I like singing, especially English classical music, because it helps me improve my speaking and pronunciation."
Ejemplo: I enjoy singing, especially English classical music, because it helps me improve my speaking skills and pronunciation.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Prøv å gjøre svaret ditt mer klart og sammenhengende. Bruk enkle setninger og unngå forvirrende uttrykk. For eksempel, "No, I haven't learned singing formally because I think singing is not very difficult; you just listen and repeat the song."
Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken singing lessons because I believe singing is not very difficult; you just listen to the song and try to repeat it.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Svar direkte på spørsmålet og bruk klare setninger. Unngå uklare uttrykk og feil ordvalg. For eksempel, "I don't usually sing for others, but when I'm alone at home, I like to sing along with my favorite songs on TV."
Ejemplo: I don't usually sing for anyone, but when I'm alone at home, I enjoy singing along to my favorite songs on TV.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Gjør svaret ditt mer flytende og naturlig ved å bruke sammenhengende setninger. For eksempel, "Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because they enjoy the music while singing."
Ejemplo: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because they enjoy the music and feel joyful while singing.
× Yes, of course I like singing, especially English classical music's.
✓ Yes, of course I like singing, especially English classical music.
The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and should not have an apostrophe or be pluralized. Using 'music's' is incorrect. The correct form is 'music'. This avoids confusion and maintains proper noun usage.
× The main reason I sing this kind of music is that how to improve my speaking and pronunciation.
✓ The main reason I sing this kind of music is to improve my speaking and pronunciation.
The phrase 'is that how to improve' is ungrammatical. The correct structure uses an infinitive phrase 'to improve' to express purpose. This correction clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.
× Have you ever learnt how to sing?
✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?
Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past tense forms of 'learn'. However, 'learned' is more common in American English, while 'learnt' is British English. Depending on the variety of English, 'learned' may be preferred for clarity.
× No, because in my opinion singing it is not as difficult as with thank because you just threw the next and repeat after the music like a character.
✓ No, because in my opinion singing is not as difficult as you think, because you just listen to the text and repeat after the music like a character.
The original sentence has multiple errors: 'singing it is' is incorrect; 'with thank' should be 'you think'; 'threw the next' should be 'listen to the text'. The corrected sentence fixes these errors and improves clarity and grammar.
× Who do you want to sing for?
✓ Who do you want to sing for?
This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.
× No, I don't want to think for someone, but then when I'm alone at home I just turn on the TV and Thursday Best music, which I like to think and just thing it.
✓ No, I don't want to sing for someone, but when I'm alone at home I just turn on the TV and listen to the best music, which I like to sing and just sing along to.
The original sentence misuses 'think' instead of 'sing', and 'Thursday Best music' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Think' should be 'sing', and 'listen to the best music' fits the context. The phrase 'just thing it' is corrected to 'just sing along to' for clarity and correctness.
× Absolutely singing can bring. To people hapiness because when they are singing they also enjoy the music.
✓ Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because when they are singing they also enjoy the music.
The original sentence has a misplaced period and misspelling of 'happiness'. The corrected sentence removes the period after 'bring', corrects 'hapiness' to 'happiness', and improves flow and clarity.