Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接并给出了记忆名字的例子，结构基本清楚。但“good habit to remember things”搭配不自然，建议改为“good memorisation habits”；“repeat and hate and then repeat eight”表达不清，可能需要说“repeat them several times”；“associate with the others' features”应改为“associate them with people's facial features”。注意使用准确的动词和代词，避免让考官猜测意思。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things because I have a strong memory and some effective memorisation habits. For example, when I need to remember several names, I repeat them several times and associate each name with the person’s facial features. This makes the names much easier to recall.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点、原因和具体例子，内容切题且逻辑较好。主要问题是时态不一致，“there have been times I forget”应改为“there have been times when I have forgotten”或“there are times when I forget”；“emails for my tutor”更自然的说法是“emails from my tutor”；可以使用“especially when”连接原因，使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have occasionally forgotten something important, mainly because I’m often busy with my studies. For instance, I sometimes miss important emails from my tutor or forget to reply to messages when I’m overwhelmed with housework and coursework. Fortunately, I now use a calendar to avoid making the same mistake.

Sugerencia: 回答列出了三项日常事务，内容具体，且使用了“firstly”和“then”组织信息。不过“tool list”应为“to-do list”，“English vocabularies”通常改为不可数的“English vocabulary”或“new English words”，“from my tutorial”应改为“from my tutor”。第一句信息较多，可以拆分或用“Also”连接，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I need to remember several things in my daily life. First, I check my to-do list to review the tasks I planned the day before. I also write down new English words and phrases. In addition, I check messages and emails from my tutor regularly.

Sugerencia: 回答使用了对比结构，说明了学习任务和日常事务的不同记忆方法，这是优点。但“review my to the list”应改为“review my to-do list”；“the important things”过于笼统，可具体说“deadlines and appointments”；“because I can remember them in advance”与前面的“need reminders”逻辑矛盾，建议改为“because I’m less likely to remember them”。可用“However”清楚地引出对比。

Ejemplo: For important study tasks, I usually write detailed notes and review my to-do list every morning. This helps me keep track of deadlines and appointments. However, for simple daily routines, I still set reminders on my phone because I’m less likely to remember them. This system helps me stay organised.

× Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have a strong memory and good habit to remember things.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have a strong memory and a good habit of remembering things.

可数名词 habit 在这里是单数，前面需要使用不定冠词 a。两个名词短语并列时，也应保持结构平行：a strong memory and a good habit。

× Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have a strong memory and good habit to remember things.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I have a strong memory and a good habit of remembering things.

介词 of 后面要接动名词形式，因此应使用 remembering，而不是 to remember。表达“有……的习惯”时，常用 have a habit of doing something。

× For example, when I have to remember several names, I really repeat and hate and then repeat eight and then associate with the others' features.

✓ For example, when I have to remember several names, I repeat them eight times and then associate them with the others' features.

动词 repeat 和 associate 后面需要明确的宾语。这里指代 several names，所以应使用宾格代词 them。注意，原句中的 hate 属于用词或听写问题，不属于指定的语法问题类型，因此在修改时删除。

× Actually, there have been times I forget something important because I'm quite busy with my studies.

✓ Actually, there have been times when I have forgotten something important because I'm quite busy with my studies.

主句使用现在完成时 there have been，描述过去到现在发生过的经历，因此从句也应使用现在完成时 have forgotten。when 可以连接 times 和后面的从句，使句子结构更加完整。

× For example, I sometimes miss important emails for my tutor or forget to reply to the messages when I'm overwhelmed with the housework and the coursework.

✓ For example, I sometimes miss important emails from my tutor or forget to reply to the messages when I'm overwhelmed with the housework and the coursework.

如果想表达“来自导师的邮件”，应使用介词 from，而不是 for。from my tutor 表示邮件的发送者是导师。

× Well, firstly I remind myself of the tasks I planned the day before by checking my tool list, then I record new English vocabularies and new phrases.

✓ Well, firstly I remind myself of the tasks I planned the day before by checking my tool list, then I record new English vocabulary and new phrases.

vocabulary 通常是不可数名词，表示“词汇”时一般不加复数词尾 -s。若要表示具体的词，可以说 new English words。

× For important study tasks, I usually write detailed notes and review my to the list every morning.

✓ For important study tasks, I usually write detailed notes and review my to-do list every morning.

to the list 不是正确的固定表达。表示“待办事项清单”时，应使用复合名词 to-do list。复合名词中的 to-do 作定语修饰 list。