Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give a concise specific example. Use correct verb forms and simpler phrasing: "I’m quite good at remembering things because..." Limit to 2–3 short sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering things because I have a strong visual memory. For example, I can often recall where my family misplaced small items, like keys or glasses, which helps my mother find them quickly.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and avoid repeated or confusing statements. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two concise supporting details (what happened, how you felt, what you did). Use linking words like "so" or "then" to connect events.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my phone at school. I realised it after I arrived home, so I felt anxious and had to return to school to collect it.

Sugerencia: Clarify the idea and use accurate vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence about the kinds of things you must remember daily (tasks, appointments, chores). Give specific examples and use linking words like "for example" or "such as." Avoid unclear words or literal translations.

Ejemplo: In daily life I need to remember routine tasks and appointments. For example, I must remember to cook rice for my family, pay bills on time, and clean the house regularly.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and clear sequencing. Start with a topic sentence describing your main memory strategies, then give specific methods with linking words like "for example" or "also." Use correct verb forms (take notes, compare lists, ask someone to remind you).

Ejemplo: I usually remember important things by taking notes and setting reminders on my phone. For example, I write a to-do list, compare it with my friend’s list to make sure I haven't missed anything, and sometimes ask my mother to remind me about urgent tasks.

× Yes, I am a gifted person that possess A memorandizing things.

✓ Yes, I am a gifted person who possesses a good memory.

Original uses incorrect relative pronoun 'that' for a person and wrong pronoun/capitalization 'A memorandizing things'. 'Possess' needs third-person singular 'possesses' to agree with 'person'. Use 'who' for people and a noun phrase 'a good memory' is natural. Suggestion: use 'who' + verb with s for singular subject and replace awkward noun phrase with 'a good memory'.

× For example, I usually remember things that have lost for my mom to find again.

✓ For example, I usually remember things that my mom has lost so she can find them again.

Original misuses passive structure and preposition 'for' and word order. Use active construction 'my mom has lost' and purpose/result clause 'so she can find them again'. Also change 'things...have lost' to 'things my mom has lost'.

× Yes, I have forgot my phone in the school.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten my phone at school.

The present perfect requires past participle 'forgotten' rather than simple past 'forgot'. Also use 'at school' instead of 'in the school' for general location. Suggestion: use 'have' + past participle for actions with present relevance.

× That was a dreadful memory because when I arrive at home, I remember that I have forgot my phone at home.

✓ That was a dreadful memory because when I arrived home, I remembered that I had forgotten my phone.

Mixed tenses caused confusion. The main clause is past ('That was'), so subordinate events should use past forms: 'arrived' (simple past) and 'remembered' (simple past). The phone being left earlier should be past perfect 'had forgotten' or 'had left' to show it happened before the remembering. Also 'at home' after 'arrived' can be simplified to 'home'.

× Then I have to go there and find it again.

✓ Then I had to go back and find it.

Context is past narrative, so use simple past 'had to' not present perfect 'have to'. 'Go there' is less natural than 'go back'. Use 'find it' is fine. Suggestion: maintain past tense throughout the story.

× In my daily life I usually have the meat for remember some kinds of work, especially by cooking rice for my family or scraping my house.

✓ In my daily life I usually use reminders to remember different kinds of tasks, especially cooking rice for my family or sweeping my house.

Original has multiple errors: 'have the meat' is incorrect word choice and likely intended 'have a method' or 'use reminders'; 'for remember' should be 'to remember' (infinitive). 'Some kinds of work' is better as 'different kinds of tasks'. 'Scraping my house' is wrong verb; use 'sweeping' or 'cleaning'. Also maintain present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'use reminders' and infinitive 'to remember' and correct verbs for household chores.

× I usually remember things by taking note and get things compared for my friend and told my mom to memorizing it for me.

✓ I usually remember things by taking notes, comparing lists with my friend, and asking my mom to memorize them for me.

Several issues: 'taking note' should be plural 'taking notes' and 'by' should be followed by gerund forms consistently. 'get things compared for my friend' is ungrammatical; use 'comparing lists with my friend'. 'told my mom to memorizing' mixes tense and form; use 'asking my mom to memorize' (infinitive). Also keep objects plural 'them'. Suggestion: use parallel gerund structures after 'by' and correct infinitive forms when asking someone to do something.