Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Используйте правильную грамматику и простую структуру: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите одно-две конкретные причины. Избегайте повторов и междометий (uh). Проверьте согласование подлежащего и глагола и выбор существительных (memory vs memories).

Ejemplo: I am quite good at memorising. In school I had to learn many dates and poems for history and literature, which helped me develop techniques for remembering facts.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно: начните с краткого утверждения о конкретном случае, затем объясните причину. Избегайте неточной лексики («ever» не нужен) и неверной грамматики. Уточните, что именно забыли — это добавит содержания.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting. It happened because I relied on memory instead of writing it down, so I missed the time.

Sugerencia: Будьте конкретнее и избегайте расплывчатых фраз («and so on»). Дайте прямой ответ, затем перечислите 3–4 конкретных примера с корректной лексикой (mother's and father's phone numbers). Поддержите ответ коротким пояснением, почему это важно.

Ejemplo: I need to remember practical information such as my address, my phone number and my parents' phone numbers because I often have to give them to delivery services or emergency contacts.

Sugerencia: Дайте ясную структуру: тема + 1–2 конкретные методы с объяснением. Уберите повторы и звуки-заполнители (uh). Можете упомянуть использование заметок или напоминаний как современную стратегию.

Ejemplo: If I need to remember something important, I usually write it down several times and make a note on my phone. Repeating and using reminders helps me avoid forgetting.

× As for me, I reckon that I are good at memories and things because in my school we have a lot of subjects which uh, we should uh, memorize a lot of dates or poems such as, uh, history or literature.

✓ As for me, I reckon that I am good at memorizing things because at my school we have a lot of subjects in which we have to memorize many dates or poems, such as history or literature.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error ('I are' should be 'I am') and incorrect noun form and word choice ('memories' should be the gerund 'memorizing' or noun 'memory', and 'things' is vague). Also awkward phrasing 'in my school' should be 'at my school', and 'which we should memorize' is better expressed as 'in which we have to memorize'. Suggestions: use 'I am' for first-person singular, use gerund 'memorizing' for the ability, replace 'things' with 'memorizing things' or specific objects, and prefer 'have to' for obligation. Use present simple 'am' with subject 'I', use correct noun/gerund forms, and improve preposition use.

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important, but I believe that it is normal because in my opinion, people can't believe all of they listen.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important, but I believe that it is normal because, in my opinion, people cannot remember everything they hear.

The phrase 'have ever forgotten' is incorrect in this context; 'ever' is unnecessary with present perfect for a simple affirmative anecdote—use 'I have forgotten'. The second clause has multiple errors: 'can't believe all of they listen' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'cannot remember everything they hear' or 'can't believe everything they hear'. Corrections: use 'cannot' (or can't) and the pronoun 'they' should not be followed by 'listen'; use the verb 'remember' or the expression 'everything they hear'. Also remove redundant 'that it'. Suggestions: use 'I have forgotten' for past experience and 'cannot remember everything they hear' for the general statement. Maintain present perfect for life experiences and correct verb and pronoun usage.

× It seems to me that I need to remember some things in my daily life, such as my address, my phone number or my mother's father's phone numbers and so on.

✓ It seems to me that I need to remember some things in my daily life, such as my address, my phone number, and my parents' phone numbers.

The phrase 'my mother's father's phone numbers' is incorrect and ambiguous. It looks like the speaker intended 'my mother's and father's phone numbers' or simply 'my parents' phone numbers'. Use the possessive plural 'parents'' for clarity. Also use parallel structure and commas: 'my address, my phone number, and my parents' phone numbers.' Suggestions: use correct possessive forms and parallel list construction. Correct pronoun/possessive usage and improve conciseness.

× Well, if I need to remember some important things, I, uh, usually read it uh, I usually, uh, write it, uh, several times.

✓ Well, if I need to remember some important things, I usually read them and write them several times.

Pronoun agreement error: 'it' does not agree with plural 'things'—use 'them'. Repetition and fillers removed for clarity. Also better to coordinate verbs: 'read them and write them several times.' Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestions: replace 'it' with 'them', remove redundant 'I usually' repetition, and combine actions in one sentence. Use correct object pronouns for plural antecedents and streamline sentence structure.