Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答总体自然且相关，但句子较多重复与冗长，结构上可更直接先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。同时注意把从句和时态处理更简洁（如“not as good as I used to be”）。可增加连接词以提升连贯性并控制在最多5句内。

Ejemplo: Not really; I’m not as good at memorising now as I was when I was a child. Nowadays I often forget small things, especially when I’m tired or very busy, because I rely on my phone to record details. As a result, I make less effort to memorise them.

Sugerencia: 回答清晰且有具体例子，结构良好但可用更简洁的表达并加入因果连接词，使逻辑更紧凑。例如把情感描述与改变的做法合并，保持句子精炼。

Ejemplo: Yes. Last month I forgot to check the departure time and missed my high-speed train, which was very frustrating. Since then, I always check my tickets the night before to avoid the same mistake.

Sugerencia: 内容具体且相关，但可合并相似项并用连接词加强条理，例如先总述再列举，最后点出困难。注意避免重复词语（如两次“especially”/“things”）。

Ejemplo: I need to remember both work-related items, such as my schedule, meetings and deadlines, and personal events like appointments, train times and friends’ birthdays. When I’m especially busy, it becomes hard to keep all of that in my head.

Sugerencia: 回答包含具体方法，信息完整，但有一处表达不完整（“calendar on my”应补足设备）。可稍作重组：先概述主要方法，再举例说明并用连接词衔接，保持句数不超过五句。

Ejemplo: I rely mainly on my digital calendar, where I set reminders for important events and deadlines. For smaller tasks I use a simple to-do list and check it several times a day, which works much better than relying on memory alone.

× Not really, at least not good as I used to be.

✓ Not really, at least not as good as I used to be.

句子中缺少介词短语中的“as”来构成比较结构“as good as”。应该为“not as good as I used to be”。建议：在表示与过去相比时，使用完整的比较结构“not as ... as ...”。

× I guess I write on my phone too much so I don't make as much effort to remember these things.

✓ I guess I write things on my phone too much, so I don't make as much effort to remember them.

原句中“write on my phone”缺少宾语，造成结构不完整；此外代词指代应和前文一致，使用“them”指代“these things”。建议：在动词后加上明确的宾语，并用合适的代词保持一致。

× Just last month I forgot to check the departure time carefully and ended up missing my high speed train which was really frustrating.

✓ Just last month I forgot to check the departure time carefully and ended up missing my high-speed train, which was really frustrating.

“high speed”在此应为复合形容词用连字符“high-speed”；另外在“train”后面插入定语从句时用逗号更自然。建议：复合形容词前用连字符，必要时用逗号分隔主句与非限制性定语从句。

× I usually put important events and deadlines into the calendar on my and set remember reminders in advance.

✓ I usually put important events and deadlines into the calendar on my phone and set reminders in advance.

原句“calendar on my”缺少名词“phone”，且“set remember reminders”中“remember”多余且用法错误，正确为“set reminders”。建议：检查短语完整性，避免多余词语，确保名词和动词搭配正确。

× For smaller tasks I keep a simple To Do List and check it several times during the day.

✓ For smaller tasks, I keep a simple to-do list and check it several times during the day.

格式问题：“To Do List”更常见的书写为“to-do list”。句子本身语法正确，仅需规范大小写和连字符。建议：使用规范写法“to-do list”。

× I also need to remember personal things like appointments, train times and my friend's birthdays.

✓ I also need to remember personal things like appointments, train times, and my friends' birthdays.

“my friend's birthdays”暗示只有一个朋友有多个生日，正确应为复数所有格“my friends' birthdays”表示多个朋友的生日。建议：根据语义选择单数或复数所有格。