Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: answer the question first (yes or no), then give a concise reason and one specific example. Reduce hesitations and avoid irrelevant words. Use linking words like "because" or "which" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things because I often travel and vivid experiences stick in my mind. For example, when I visited the mountains last year, the sights and sounds created strong memories that I still recall clearly.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then describe what happened and what you learned using one or two specific details. Use past tense for the event and linking words like "because" and "as a result".

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot a key formula during a finance exam, which caused me to lose marks. Since then, I review formulas daily and practise past papers so I don’t make the same mistake again.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and be specific about what you need to remember. Group related items and use linking words such as "for example" or "because". Replace vague phrases like "so many knowledge" with concrete examples.

Ejemplo: I need to remember new English vocabulary every day, especially medical terms because I am preparing for a health-related exam. For example, I learn five medical words each day and review them with flashcards.

Sugerencia: Describe a clear method in a logical order and give one specific example. Use linking words like "first," "then," and "for example." Avoid unclear phrases such as "site clock"—use "calendar" or "alarm."

Ejemplo: I usually write important tasks in a notebook and set alarms on my phone to remind me. For example, I put study deadlines in my phone calendar and ask a friend to remind me before exams.

× Yes, I go to travel, look some gorgeous view, uh, maybe make me have a very deep memory and umm is a meaningful and interesting memory for me.

✓ Yes, I travel to see some gorgeous views; they give me very deep, meaningful, and interesting memories.

The student used base verbs where gerunds or infinitives are required and had word order and article issues. 'Go to travel' should be 'travel' or 'go travelling'; 'look some gorgeous view' should be 'see some gorgeous views' (use 'see' and plural 'views'); 'make me have a very deep memory' is unnatural — use 'give me very deep memories'. Also corrected word order and articles and parallel structure. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (infinitive or gerund) and keep parallel structure when listing actions.

× Yeah, in the finance exam I forget very important knowledge, so it's so bad things.

✓ Yeah, in the finance exam I forgot some very important information, so it was really bad.

The student used present tense 'forget' for a past event; use simple past 'forgot'. 'Very important knowledge' is better as 'some very important information'. 'It's so bad things' is ungrammatical — corrected to 'it was really bad' to match past tense and singular concept. Suggestion: use simple past for completed events and choose appropriate nouns (information vs knowledge) and correct agreement.

× If I have chance, maybe I will remember it more and practice it.

✓ If I had the chance, I would review and practice it more.

The conditional statement needs a past subjunctive/modal structure: 'If I had the chance' + 'I would...' instead of 'If I have chance... I will'. Also 'remember it more and practice it' is awkward; use 'review and practice it more'. Suggestion: use correct conditional form for hypothetical situations: second conditional for unreal present/future scenarios.

× So is the important things.

✓ So it was an important matter.

The sentence lacks proper subject-verb order and agreement. 'So is the important things' mixes singular verb form with plural noun and wrong word order. Rewrote to 'So it was an important matter' to match context (past) and meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject precedes verb and maintain number agreement.

× In my real life, I need remember so many English new words.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many new English words.

Missing 'to' before infinitive 'remember' is required after 'need' in this context ('need to remember'). Also adjective order: 'new English words' not 'English new words'; 'so many' simplified to 'many'. Suggestion: use 'need to' + verb and correct adjective order: determiner + adjective(s) + noun.

× You know, I prepare my health exam so I need improve my health English skills.

✓ You know, I'm preparing for my health exam, so I need to improve my English for healthcare.

Use 'prepare for' rather than 'prepare' alone. Also 'need improve' requires 'need to improve'. 'Health English skills' is awkward; 'English for healthcare' or 'medical English' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('prepare for') and include 'to' after 'need' when followed by a verb.

× In my life I need to remember so many knowledge.

✓ In my life I need to remember a lot of knowledge.

'So many' is used with countable nouns; 'knowledge' is uncountable, so use 'a lot of' or 'much' ('a lot of knowledge'). Also add 'to' after 'need'. Suggestion: choose quantifiers that match noun countability.

× Maybe I will write down in my and I will tell the other people and other people can remind me.

✓ Maybe I will write it down in my notebook and tell other people so they can remind me.

Original lacks object after 'write down' ('write it down') and 'in my' missing noun (notebook). 'Tell the other people' simplified to 'tell other people'. Suggestion: always include necessary objects and be specific (e.g., 'notebook').

× So I think it's a good things.

✓ So I think it's a good thing.

Mismatch between singular article and plural noun: 'a good things' should be 'a good thing'. Also maintain singular/plural consistency. Suggestion: match 'a' with singular noun.

× Maybe if important, you need the site clock and the clock name is write some important things.

✓ If something is important, you should use a digital reminder or alarm and write down the important things.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing subject ('if important'), incorrect noun 'site clock' unclear — replaced with 'digital reminder or alarm', 'the clock name is write some important things' is ungrammatical. Provided clearer, natural phrasing: 'use a digital reminder or alarm and write down the important things.' Suggestion: use clear nouns for tools (reminder, alarm) and the verb phrase 'write down' for recording information.