Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant info (e.g. going to the doctor can be mentioned if it directly relates). Use correct verb forms and simpler sentence structure.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put items at home, so I write short notes to remind myself. Because of this, I sometimes consult a doctor to check my memory.

Sugerencia: Answer the question clearly with a specific example and coherent explanation. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct noun phrases. Avoid vague phrases like "with my daughter regarding."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot my apartment keys and my daughter was with me, which caused a lot of trouble. Because of incidents like that, I decided to see a doctor about my memory problems.

Sugerencia: Give a clear list with categories and one or two specific examples. Use linking words (such as "for example" or "such as") and correct phrasing. Keep it natural and avoid confusing or vague words like "bliss of things."

Ejemplo: In daily life I need to remember practical things, such as appointments, what I study, and where I put my belongings. For example, I always try to remember my class schedule and where I leave my phone.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with one or two clear strategies and an example. Use proper tense and sentence structure, and linking words like "so" or "for example." Avoid asking the examiner questions in this part.

Ejemplo: I usually use reminders to remember important things. For example, I set alarms or write entries in my phone calendar, and I also ask a family member to remind me when necessary.

× No, I'm not. I actually I struggle with my memory so I usually find myself go to the doctor and try to find solution because I forget anything about my home.

✓ No, I'm not. Actually, I struggle with my memory, so I usually find myself going to the doctor and trying to find a solution because I forget things at home.

The sentence has several structure and verb form issues: repeated 'I' is unnecessary; 'find myself go' requires the -ing form after 'find myself' (gerund) so 'going'; 'try to find solution' needs an article 'a' and gerund 'trying'; 'forget anything about my home' is unnatural—use 'forget things at home'. Improve by removing redundancy and using correct verb forms and articles.

× Yes I have. I have forgotten my apartment with my daughter regarding.

✓ Yes, I have. I once forgot my apartment key when I was with my daughter.

Original is unclear and uses awkward phrasing 'forgotten my apartment with my daughter regarding.' Use simple past 'forgot' for a completed event and rephrase to specify what was forgotten (e.g., 'apartment key') and the context 'when I was with my daughter.' This fixes tense and clarity.

× My problem with memory. So I have to meet the doctors.

✓ I have a problem with my memory, so I have to see doctors.

'My problem with memory.' is a fragment lacking a verb; change to 'I have a problem with my memory.' 'Meet the doctors' is unnatural in this context; use 'see doctors' for consulting medical professionals. Also 'doctors' can be plural or singular depending on context.

× I would remember who, what I study, the world, English, the subject I have studied, the things, the bliss of things after I put them.

✓ I would remember who and what I study: English and the subjects I have studied, the things I own, and where I put them.

Original lists are disorganized and some phrases are unclear ('the bliss of things after I put them'). Use clearer parallel structure and conjunctions: 'who and what I study' and group related items; replace unclear phrase with 'where I put them' to convey remembering locations of belongings.

× I told one of my family to Remember Me or I booked it in my schedule and.

✓ I ask one of my family members to remind me, or I write it in my schedule.

'Told one of my family to Remember Me' is incorrect: 'remind me' is the correct verb phrase and 'one of my family' should be 'one of my family members'. 'Booked it in my schedule' is awkward; 'write it in my schedule' or 'put it in my calendar' is natural. Also avoid trailing 'and.' Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I ask' or 'I ask one of my family members'.

× Can I see the schedule to just remember?

✓ Can I check the schedule to help me remember?

The modal 'Can I' is acceptable for permission, but 'to just remember' is awkward. Use 'to help me remember' to express purpose. 'Check the schedule' is more natural than 'see the schedule.'