Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and repetition, and give one or two specific supporting reasons or examples. Use simpler, accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'good at memorising' rather than 'memorable person') and avoid claiming superiority (e.g., about IQ).

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, as a fitness trainer I quickly remember clients’ workout plans and dietary preferences, which helps me give personalised sessions. This skill comes from regularly reviewing notes and practising recall techniques.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence saying 'Yes' and briefly describe a single specific incident in chronological order, using correct tense and fewer hesitations. Include a short reflection or consequence to make the answer complete.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot my car at a shopping mall. I parked, did my shopping, and drove home without realising; I only noticed when I needed my car keys. I had to return to the mall to find it, which taught me to double-check before leaving.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct topic sentence stating the key things you must remember, then list two specific examples with linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'also'). Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing off.

Ejemplo: I need to remember my clients’ workout schedules and their individual diet plans. For instance, I must recall who is doing strength training versus cardio, and also remember any dietary restrictions so I can tailor their programs safely.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence describing your main memory method(s), then offer one or two specific strategies with brief explanations and linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'remember' not 'member') and avoid vague statements.

Ejemplo: I use lists and routines to remember important things. For example, I write daily tasks in my phone and set reminders, and I also review client notes each morning so the information stays fresh in my mind.

× I definitely, uh, say that I, I, I am very intellectual or a memorable person as well.

✓ I would definitely say that I am a very intellectual and memorable person.

The original sentence has awkward adverb/adjective placement and redundancy. 'Definitely' should modify 'say' so 'I would definitely say' is natural. Use 'a very intellectual and memorable person' to correctly connect adjectives with 'and'. Remove repeated fillers 'I, I, I' for clarity.

× it's easy for me to memorize the things, phrases as well as sentences easily, uh, because, uh, of my IQ level is more, higher than the others.

✓ It's easy for me to memorize things, phrases, and sentences easily because my IQ is higher than others'.

Remove the redundant definite article 'the' before 'things'. Use 'and' for list coordination. 'Because of my IQ level is more, higher than the others' is ungrammatical; correct to 'because my IQ is higher than others'' or better 'higher than other people's'. Also avoid repeating 'easy' and 'easily' in same clause.

× Yes, it, it's happened sometime.

✓ Yes, it has happened sometimes.

Use present perfect 'has happened' to indicate an experience at unspecified time. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to mean 'occasionally'.

× if I remember clearly, uh, I go for a shopping mall and after the shopping, I uh, forgot that I come uh in the shopping mall in the in on the car.

✓ If I remember correctly, I go to a shopping mall and after shopping I forgot where I parked my car.

Use 'remember correctly' not 'remember clearly'. Use preposition 'to' with 'go' (go to a mall). 'After the shopping' better as 'after shopping'. 'Forgot that I come in the shopping mall in the in on the car' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is forgetting where one parked the car, so use 'forgot where I parked my car' where 'parked' is past participle describing completed action.

× So I go, I go, I went home and after, uh, coming home, I remember that I lost my car.

✓ So I went home, and after arriving home, I remembered that I had lost my car.

Narration of past events should use past tense consistently: 'went' and 'remembered'. For an event that occurred before another past event, use past perfect 'had lost' to show sequence ('lost' happened before 'remembered'). 'Coming home' should be 'arriving home' or 'after I got home'.

× So, as, uh, lots of things, uh, come, uh, in my mind, but I would say that, uh, I am a fitness trainer, so lots of, uh, queries of my clients and their personal plans, uh, regarding their workout or a diet, uh, uh, these things I have to remember for them that I.

✓ There are many things that come to my mind, but I would say that, as a fitness trainer, I have many clients' queries and personal plans regarding their workouts or diets that I need to remember for them.

Use 'many' instead of informal 'lots of' in formal responses; 'come to my mind' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Clients' queries' needs possessive form. 'Workout or a diet' should be pluralized as 'workouts or diets'. Reorder sentence for clarity and use 'need to remember'.

× Remember the important things. There are lots of ways to remember the things that are important in your life.

✓ To remember important things, there are many methods you can use.

Original repeats idea and has choppy imperative 'Remember the important things' that doesn't fit response flow. Combine into one smooth sentence using infinitive phrase 'To remember important things' and 'methods' for formality.

× First of all, you have to be the member and very thoughtful about it.

✓ First of all, you have to be a member and very mindful of it.

'Be the member' is incorrect; use 'be a member' or better 'be mindful'. 'Thoughtful about it' is awkward; 'mindful of it' or 'attentive to it' is clearer.

× That and makes signals to your mind that you have to remember that thing.

✓ That sends signals to your mind that you need to remember the thing.

'That and makes signals' is ungrammatical; use active verb 'sends'. 'You have to remember that thing' is wordy; 'you need to remember the thing' is smoother. Ensure pronouns refer clearly.

× So so be ready.

✓ So be prepared.

Reduce repetition 'So so' and use more natural phrase 'be prepared'. 'Prepared' is more appropriate than 'ready' in this context.