Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答题内容直接且诚实，但存在多处语法错误、重复和表达不自然。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答考官问题；2) 使用最多3句补充细节并避免重复（如“I'm not good at memorizing things”只需说一次）；3) 注意时态与名词单复数（例如 “the most thing that I hated” 改为 “what I hated most”）；4) 使用连接词使表达更连贯，如 “for example” 或 “so”。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, in high school I hated revising chapters for Chinese class because I quickly forgot what I had learned. As a result, I usually had to review material several times to remember it.

Sugerencia: 回答能表达经历，但细节不够清晰并有语法和用词错误。建议：1) 首句简洁回应“Yes, I have”并立即概述事件；2) 用正确时态和短语，如 “forgot” 而非 “have forgot”，以及 “take my ID” 而非 “bring my ID cards” 更自然；3) 提供一两句具体后果或感受，使用连接词如 “because” 或 “so”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once went to the bank to renew my credit card, but I forgot to bring my new ID because it was still in my drawer. As a result, I had to come back later, which was really inconvenient.

Sugerencia: 回答传达了要点，但句子结构混乱且重复。建议：1) 以主题句开始，如 “I need to remember my daily to-do list”；2) 用1–2句具体说明如何使用清单（例如用手机应用、按优先级安排）；3) 避免多余短语，如 “you know” 和重复“to do list”；4) 使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example”。

Ejemplo: I need to remember my daily to-do list. Because I'm not very organised, I use a smartphone app to schedule tasks and set reminders so I don't forget important errands or appointments.

Sugerencia: 内容实用但表达冗长且有语法错误。建议：1) 开始用一句总述，例如 “I usually write things down”；2) 用两三句具体说明方法（纸质笔记、手机备忘、设置提醒）并说明场景；3) 注意动词形式（例如 “recorded” 应为 “record” 或 “note”），简化句子以提高流畅度。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down, either on paper or in my phone's notes app. If I'm out or it's urgent, I set a reminder on my phone so I can check it anytime and won't forget.

× No, definitely not. When I was in high school, the most thing that I hated is to revise the chapter that we learnt in Chinese lessons.

✓ No, definitely not. When I was in high school, the thing I hated most was revising the chapters that we learned in Chinese lessons.

句子中“the most thing”用法不对，正确的是“the thing ... most”或“the most ... thing”。另外时态要一致，“is” 应改为过去时“was”。“revise the chapter”改为复数“chapters”更自然，且“learnt”可改为美式“learned”。建议把形容词顺序和时态统一，常用结构是“the thing I hated most”以表达“我最讨厌的事情”。

× I'm not good at memorizing things. I often forgot things.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things. I often forget things.

原句中“I often forgot”使用了过去式，但说话者在描述习惯应使用一般现在时“forget”。主语与动词时态应一致，表习惯用现在时。建议将经常性动作用一般现在时。

× Yes I have. Once I needed to go to the bank to renew my credit card and the bank required me to bring my ID cards.

✓ Yes, I have. Once I needed to go to the bank to renew my credit card and the bank required me to bring my ID card.

“ID cards”复数在此情境中如果指的是一张身份证应使用单数“ID card”。另外加逗号分隔“Yes, I have”。时态过去式使用正确。建议根据实际数量使用单数或复数。

× I bought the old one but the new one has stayed in my drawer so I have forgot that.

✓ I brought the old one but the new one had stayed in my drawer so I forgot about it.

原句中“bought”应为“brought”（带来）更符合语境。“has stayed”与过去时间点应改为过去完成时“had stayed”以表示在我去银行之前就放在抽屉里；“have forgot”语法错误，应为过去式“forgot”或过去分词“forgotten”但此处用简单过去“forgot”。另外“forgot that”不自然，改为“forgot about it”。建议注意bring/buy 区分，完成时与一般过去时的配合。

× My To Do List. I think I'm not a very organized person, but you know I'm not good at memorizing things so I need to use A to do list to help me schedule the things I have to do in the day.

✓ My to-do list. I think I'm not a very organized person, but because I'm not good at memorizing things I need to use a to-do list to help me schedule the things I have to do during the day.

“A to do list”中冠词大小写和连字符需规范：应为“a to-do list”。“in the day”不自然，常用“during the day”。建议统一大小写和连字符并使用合适的介词短语。

× So the To Do List have.

✓ So the to-do list does.

主语“the to-do list”为单数名词，谓语应使用单数动词“does”而不是“have”。此外句子不完整，需补足谓语或接续从句，改为简洁的“Yes, the to-do list does.”会更清楚。建议确认主语单复数后匹配动词。

× Sometimes I choose to write it down in the paper, but when I am out or something emergency I would recorded it and my phone's notebook so I can check it up wherever I go whenever I want and I won't forget that where is the things I have written down.

✓ Sometimes I choose to write it down on paper, but when I'm out or there's an emergency I would record it in my phone's notebook so I can check it wherever I go whenever I want and I won't forget where the things I have written down are.

句中多个问题： - “write it down in the paper” 应为“write it down on paper”。 - “something emergency” 应为“there's an emergency”或“in an emergency”。 - “would recorded” 时态和形式错误，需用“would record”或“record”。 - “my phone's notebook” 可改为“my phone's notes”或“notebook”并用介词“in”。 - “check it up” 不自然，改为“check it”。 - 句尾“I won't forget that where is the things I have written down”语序错误，正确为“I won't forget where the things I have written down are”。 建议：注意介词搭配（on paper, in my phone），动词形式（base form after would），以及英文陈述句的语序（主语+谓语+宾语/表语）。