Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetition. Start with a direct answer, then briefly explain a method and give one specific example. Use linking words like 'so' or 'for example' smoothly.

Ejemplo: I’m not very good at memorising things. However, I try to improve this by using visual techniques I found online, such as creating mind maps and colourful flashcards, which help me remember key points more easily.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence answering the question, then provide a concise, chronological account with one or two specific details and a linking word to show result. Reduce fillers and correct simple grammar (tense/agreement).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Last semester I forgot my ID card on the day of an important exam, so I could not enter the exam hall. Fortunately, the university allowed me to take a supplementary exam the following week.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Group related items and use linking phrases (for example, such as, because) to explain why they matter. Be specific about items and their purpose.

Ejemplo: I have a few important things to remember every day, such as my transport card for commuting and my student ID for campus access. For example, I must remember to tap on and tap off the bus to avoid fines.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence describing your main strategies, then give two specific methods with brief explanation and a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid fillers and clarify what 'color' technique means (e.g., coloured notes or highlights).

Ejemplo: I use a couple of simple strategies to remember important things. For daily items I keep them in a dedicated pocket in my bag so I always carry them, and for studying I use coloured notes and highlighted headings to organise information visually.

× Uh, I have to admit that, that I'm not really good at memorizing things, but, uh, I try to learn how to make things more memorable by some method, For example, the visual, uh, memorizing, which I learned on the Internet.

✓ Uh, I have to admit that I'm not really good at memorizing things, but I try to learn how to make them more memorable by some methods. For example, visual memorization, which I learned about on the internet.

The original sentence contains a repeated conjunction 'that, that' and improper capitalization 'For'. Also 'the visual, uh, memorizing' is awkward; use 'visual memorization'. Use plural 'methods' to match 'some'. Remove filler words and redundant commas. Suggestion: remove the duplicate 'that', use 'them' to refer to 'things', and use 'learned about on the internet'. Grammar problem type ID:16

× Uh, actually yes. Umm, it was just last semester where I have an important exam, umm, on class, but I forgot to bring my ID card which was required to enter the exam.

✓ Uh, actually yes. Umm, it was just last semester when I had an important exam in class, but I forgot to bring my ID card, which was required to enter the exam.

The sentence mixes past and present tense: 'it was... where I have' should use past tense 'I had'. Also 'on class' is incorrect preposition; use 'in class'. Add a comma before the relative clause 'which was required'. Use 'when' not 'where' for time. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense for past events and use correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Uh, but luckily uh, the university allowed me to take the supplementary exam.

✓ Uh, but luckily the university allowed me to take the supplementary exam.

Remove filler 'uh' and keep past tense 'allowed' which is correct. This is a stylistic cleanup rather than tense correction. Ensure past tense remains consistent. No grammatical tense change needed except removing disfluencies. Grammar problem type ID:5

× And there are the few few thing I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ And there are a few things I need to remember in my daily life.

Use 'a few' instead of 'the few few' and plural 'things' to agree with 'a few'. Correct article and plurality. Suggestion: 'a few things' is the standard phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:1

× For example, I have to remember to bring my old book card, which is necessary for commuting.

✓ For example, I have to remember to bring my library card, which is necessary for borrowing books or for commuting services.

'Old book card' is unclear; likely 'library card' or 'book card'. Clarify noun choice. Also explain function: if it's for commuting, phrase accordingly. This fixes adjective-noun collocation. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I have to tap on and tap off on the bus and the train.

✓ I have to tap on and tap off when using the bus or the train.

Original repeats 'on' and has awkward structure. Use 'when using' and 'or' to indicate either bus or train. This corrects sentence flow and preposition placement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× That also an important thing to remember as well.

✓ That is also an important thing to remember.

Missing verb 'is' and redundant 'also'/'as well'. Insert 'is' to form a complete sentence and remove redundancy. Suggestion: use 'That is also important to remember.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Umm, there's few ways I used to remember things.

✓ Umm, there are a few ways I use to remember things.

'There's few' is incorrect; use plural 'there are a few'. Also 'used to remember' implies past habit; since describing general methods, use present 'use'. If referring to past, keep 'used to' and adjust context. Suggestion: decide tense—here present is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:14

× For example, I always put my essential, uh, daily stuff in my bag and I always carry my bag of course.

✓ For example, I always put my essential daily items in my bag, and I always carry my bag, of course.

Use 'items' instead of informal 'stuff'. Remove unnecessary comma after 'essential' and add commas around 'of course'. This improves article and noun choice. 'My bag' repeated could be smoothed but grammatically okay. Grammar problem type ID:22

× And if I have to remember my study or my lessons, I, I use, uh, some technique like I mentioned before, like color.

✓ And if I have to remember my studies or my lessons, I use some techniques I mentioned before, such as color-coding.

Use plural 'studies' or better 'study material'. 'Use some technique' should be plural 'techniques' to match general methods. 'Like color' is vague; 'such as color-coding' is clearer. Remove disfluencies. Also keep consistent present tense 'use'. Grammar problem type ID:8