Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、言い回しの重複・文法ミス・語彙選択の誤りが目立ちます。トピック文を明確にし、接続語を使って理由と例を短く整理してください。具体的には“I'm good at memorising facts, especially in history”のように始め、“however”で対比を示し、冗長な繰り返し（I actually I my my）を避ける練習をしましょう。また“historical history”は不自然なので“history”や“historical facts”を使い、“a region”の意味が不明確なら“dates, events, and places”など具体語を使います。

Ejemplo: I'm quite good at memorising facts, especially in history, because I can remember dates, events and places easily. However, I'm not strong at calculations, so I struggle more with math.

Sugerencia: 意味は伝えようとしていますが語彙の誤用（crime school→cram school?）と文構造の混乱があり、具体的な時制や理由の説明が曖昧です。まず語彙を正確にし（例：cram school＝受験塾）、短い文で時系列を整理し、接続語（for example, because, so）で理由と結果を明確に述べてください。重要な出来事を説明する際は“when I was a child”の後に年齢や状況を一度に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I planned to attend a cram school before my entrance exam, but because I had to study so much at home, I forgot to go there on the crucial day and missed the lesson.

Sugerencia: 内容は良いですが文法と語順、代名詞の使い方に問題があります。主語を“I”か“we”で統一し、具体例（paper, planner, smartphone apps）を列挙する際は接続語（for example, or, and）を使って整理しましょう。また“useful”の主語を明確にして完結に述べてください。

Ejemplo: I usually write my plans on paper or use smartphone apps. For example, I use a calendar and a notes app to record appointments, which is very useful for staying organised.

Sugerencia: 回答の主旨は明確ですが、冗長な表現と文法の誤り（calendar apps→a calendar app / immediately to write on the on them）があります。まず明確なトピック文で答え、その後で具体的な方法を時系列で述べてください。接続語（for example, then, so）を使い、動詞の原型や目的語を正しく配置する練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I always use my smartphone to remember important things. For example, I add events to my calendar app and immediately write notes after I hear something important, so I don't forget later.

× I think I'm good at memorizing things because I actually I my my favorite subject is historical history and mostly I remember of the like a region or something.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing things because my favorite subject is history, and I mostly remember regions or similar things.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect pronoun placement ('I actually I my my'). Remove duplicates and place pronoun correctly: 'my favorite subject'. 'Historical history' is repetitive; use 'history'. 'Remember of' is incorrect; use 'remember' + object. Make nouns plural if general (regions). Suggestion: say 'my favorite subject is history' and 'I mostly remember regions or similar things.'

× So I'm not good at calculating like math.

✓ So I'm not good at calculating; for example, I'm not good at math.

The connector 'like' is informal and the structure is awkward. Use 'for example' to introduce an example and separate clauses properly. Alternatively: 'I'm not good at math.'

× Yes, I have umm when I was a child I had a plan to go to a crime school.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I had planned to go to a cram school.

'I have umm' is incomplete and wrong tense. Use past simple or past perfect. 'Had a plan to' is awkward; 'had planned to' or 'planned to' is natural. 'Crime school' is likely a mispronunciation of 'cram school' (a school for exam preparation). Use 'cram school.'

× It is so crucial for me because it the time was so like near to the entrance exam, so I have to study a lot so and at that time I forgot to go to the crime school.

✓ It was very important because the entrance exam was near, so I had to study a lot, and at that time I forgot to go to the cram school.

Mixed tenses and redundant words ('it the time was so like'). Use past tense consistently: 'It was very important' and 'the exam was near.' 'I have to study' should be past 'I had to study.' Remove extra 'so' and correct 'crime school' to 'cram school.'

× We need to write on a paper of the our plans and we can use smartphone because the smartphone has a app to remember and memorize of our plan and I can write a note to the to them.

✓ We need to write our plans on paper, and we can use a smartphone because it has apps to help us remember our plans, and I can write notes to them.

Pronouns and articles are incorrect: 'the our' should be 'our'; 'a paper of the our plans' should be 'write our plans on paper.' 'the smartphone has a app' -> 'it has apps.' 'memorize of our plan' -> 'help us remember our plans.' 'write a note to the to them' is unclear; 'write notes to them' or 'write a note for them.'

× So it is so you are useful for us.

✓ So it is very useful for us.

The phrase 'so you are useful for us' is incorrect and awkward. Likely intended: 'So it is very useful for us.' Use appropriate adverb 'very' and remove 'you are.'

× I always use my smartphone because and for example, I use like a calendar apps or note apps and I always immediately to write on the on them after I I hear some important things.

✓ I always use my smartphone; for example, I use calendar apps or note apps, and I immediately write on them after I hear important things.

Errors: 'because and for example' is redundant; use one connector. 'Like a calendar apps' mixes singular and plural; use 'calendar apps' (no 'a'). 'I always immediately to write on the on them' should be 'I immediately write on them.' Remove duplicate 'I'. Keep present tense 'I hear' consistent. Suggestion: simplify to 'I use calendar or note apps and immediately write on them when I hear something important.'

× So yeah.

✓ (No correction needed)

This interjection is acceptable as is; no grammatical correction necessary.