Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on answering the question directly with a clear topic sentence about your memory ability. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Provide one brief supporting detail about when you remember well or poorly, using linking words (e.g., "however", "but"). Work on basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, word order) and choose vocabulary relevant to memory (e.g., "remember", "forget", "good at memorising").

Ejemplo: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I usually remember people’s faces but I often forget details such as names or exact dates. However, I can remember information better if I make notes or repeat it several times.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear yes/no answer and give a specific example of an important thing you forgot. Use linking words to show reason and result (e.g., "because", "so", "therefore"). Keep sentences short and correct grammar: plural/singular, verb forms, and word order. Mention how often or why it happens to add detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, during exam periods, I sometimes forget to study a subject properly because I have many subjects to prepare for. As a result, I might skip revising a topic that I thought I had already covered.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear topic sentence naming the key daily items you must remember. Use specific examples and group similar items (e.g., personal information, appointments). Improve sentence fluency and punctuation, and avoid fragment sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "such as" correctly.

Ejemplo: I need to remember everyday essentials such as my email addresses, passwords and my parents’ phone numbers. I also try to remember appointments and bills, for example a doctor’s visit or a utility payment date.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about your method (e.g., using your phone). Describe the method with specific details and sequence using linking words (e.g., "first", "then", "for example"). Correct grammar (contractions, pronouns, article use) and name the app type ("notes app") rather than unclear words. Mention one additional strategy to show range.

Ejemplo: I usually use my phone’s notes app to remember important things. First, I create a note for passwords and another for contacts; then I label each note clearly. For example, I keep my parents’ phone numbers and email passwords in separate notes, and sometimes I set calendar reminders for important dates.

× I think I have a good family, especially when I'm washing silly.

✓ I think I have a good memory, especially when I'm feeling silly.

The student used 'family' and 'washing' incorrectly. The intended meaning is about memory, so 'a good memory' is correct. 'Washing silly' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'feeling silly' (adjective after verb 'feeling'). Replace incorrect words and use appropriate adjective phrase to convey the idea.

× I can't remember everything, not only the character, but in its detail in in each other.

✓ I can't remember everything, not only people's characters but also their details about each other.

Sentence structure is confused and contains repeated words ('in in') and unclear references ('its detail in in each other'). Rephrase to clarify subject and parallelism: use 'not only A but also B' and consistent nouns ('people's characters' and 'their details about each other').

× Yes, sometime when I have many thing to manage, I may forget to something like during the exam it have many subject to.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I have many things to manage, I may forget something, for example during exams when there are many subjects to study.

Multiple quantifier and number errors: 'sometime' should be plural adverb 'sometimes'; 'many thing' should be plural 'many things'; 'forget to something' is incorrect verb pattern—use 'forget something'; 'exam' should be plural 'exams' when generalizing; 'it have many subject to' is ungrammatical—use 'there are many subjects to study'.

× Prepare but I But if I I lead all subject, I will forget some subject that I already lead before.

✓ I prepare, but if I have already covered all the subjects, I will forget some subjects that I covered earlier.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and subject-verb agreement: 'lead' is wrong verb (likely 'lead' intended as 'lead' is incorrect context—use 'cover' or 'study'); repetition 'But I But if I I' must be removed. Use 'have covered' or simple past 'covered' for earlier actions and make 'subjects' plural to agree with 'all' and 'some'.

× For me, I think the thing that I need to remember is something like basic in my life.

✓ For me, I think the things I need to remember are basic things in my life.

Singular/plural and quantifier issues: 'the thing that I need to remember is something like basic' is awkward. Use plural 'things' and plural verb 'are'. Place adjective 'basic' before noun 'things' and avoid vague 'something like'.

× For example, the e-mail, password or. My. Parent phone numbers.

✓ For example, email addresses, passwords, or my parents' phone numbers.

Punctuation and structure broken by periods. List items should be parallel nouns: 'email addresses' and 'passwords' plural and 'my parents' phone numbers' uses possessive plural 'parents'' and no stray periods.

× When I need to remember something I will note it in my phone.

✓ When I need to remember something, I write it in my phone.

'Note it in my phone' is understandable but awkward; prefer 'write it in my phone' or 'note it on my phone'. Also add comma after adverbial clause. Article use: 'in my phone' can be 'on my phone' for apps. Suggest 'write it on my phone'.

× It's have the application like nose on my phone and I will write the thing that I want to remember for example.

✓ It has an application like Notes on my phone, and I write what I want to remember there.

Grammar errors: 'It's have' should be 'It has'; 'the application like nose' likely 'an application called Notes'; 'I will write the thing that I want to remember for example' is awkward — use 'I write what I want to remember there'. Correct article 'an' before vowel sound and capitalize app name 'Notes'.

× I usually note about the password that in each application on my note.

✓ I usually note the passwords for each application in my Notes app.

Preposition and word order errors: 'note about the password' should be 'note the passwords' or 'note down the passwords'; 'that in each application' should be 'for each application'; 'on my note' should be 'in my Notes app' or 'on my notes'. Use consistent plural 'passwords' and correct prepositions 'for' and 'in'.