Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 表达较直接，但存在语法和用词错误，句子冗长且部分含义不清。建议：1) 简化句子结构，先给出主题句，然后补充具体例子；2) 用正确短语代替错误表达（例如“forget the code”而非“forgotten the code”），注意时态和冠词；3) 控制在不超过5句内。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially phone numbers and PINs. Often I forget them, so I usually reset the code through the account recovery options.

Sugerencia: 叙述有内容但时态混乱、细节不够清晰，部分表达不自然。建议：1) 使用正确时态（过去式）描述经历；2) 提供具体细节（比如考试科目、复习方式）以丰富内容；3) 使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, once I almost missed a crucial university exam. I only realised the night before, so I stayed up and reviewed key topics, and managed to pass with a modest score.

Sugerencia: 回答意图清楚，但语法和表达混乱，连接词使用不当，细节不够简洁明确。建议：1) 开头给出主题句，然后用1-2句说明原因和影响；2) 使用自然搭配（e.g. “attendance affects our final grades”）；3) 去掉多余冗词，保持简洁。

Ejemplo: I need to remember my class timetable because attendance affects our final grades. To avoid missing classes, I keep a weekly schedule and set reminders on my phone.

Sugerencia: 表达较自然且有理由支持，但有些措辞不地道、句子较长且有小语法错误。建议：1) 首句直接回应并简洁说明做法；2) 使用更自然的表达如“write notes on my hand”或“jot things down on my hand”并用连接词说明原因；3) 控制长度，避免重复。

Ejemplo: I usually write important notes on my hand because it's the quickest reminder. I find it more effective than using my phone, since I'm easily distracted by apps.

× To be honest, I'm not really good at memorizing things, especially phone numbers and pin codes.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really good at memorizing things, especially phone numbers and PIN codes.

句子时态正确，但“pin codes”中“PIN”通常写作大写缩写，属于拼写/格式问题（接近形容词用法），无需改动时态。建议统一写作“PIN codes”或直接写“PINs”。

× In most of occasions I will collect the button of forgotten the code to reset the number.

✓ On most occasions I use the "forgot password" button to reset the code.

句子结构混乱，用词不当。“In most of occasions”应为“On most occasions”；“collect the button of forgotten the code”不合语法，应表达为“use the 'forgot password' button”；“reset the number”也不准确，改为“reset the code”。建议多注意固定搭配和常用表达。

× Yes, I once forgot a very important exam before I remember this.

✓ Yes, I once forgot about a very important exam before I remembered it.

涉及过去的事件，应使用过去时：主句“forgot”为过去时，时间点之后的动作也应使用过去时“remembered”。另外“forgot a very important exam”应加介词“about”，并用代词“it”指代考试。建议统一使用过去时态描述已发生的事情。

× It only has one night left for me to review, so I rushed to review all the content and roughly passed the final score.

✓ There was only one night left for me to review, so I rushed to revise all the material and barely passed the final exam.

原句时态混用，描述过去情境应使用过去时：“There was only one night left”；“review all the content”可改为“revise all the material”；“roughly passed the final score”表达不自然，改为“barely passed the final exam”。建议注意时间状语与动词时态一致，选择更自然的短语。

× For me, the most important thing to remember is the timetable of my daily courses since our final scores are firmly related to the attendance rate.

✓ For me, the most important thing to remember is the timetable of my daily courses because our final grades are closely related to attendance.

搭配与表达不自然：“since”可以，但“firmly related to the attendance rate”不地道，改为“because our final grades are closely related to attendance”。注意名词选择（grades比scores更常用）和副词搭配。

× So and to make sure I take part in all the cases to avoid the waste of this part of school.

✓ So I make sure I attend all classes to avoid missing that part of my school assessment.

原句结构不完整且词不达意：“So and to make sure”多余；“take part in all the cases”应为“attend all classes”；“avoid the waste of this part of school”不通顺，改为“avoid missing that part of my school assessment”。建议简化句子并使用常见搭配。

× I usually write the important things on my hand because it is the most convenient place I can take notice as soon as possible.

✓ I usually write important things on my hand because it is the most convenient place to notice them quickly.

原句中“take notice as soon as possible”搭配不当，应该用不定式短语“to notice them quickly”或“so I can notice them quickly”。同时“the important things”可简化为“important things”。建议学习常用结构：‘so I can…’或‘to…’。

× To be honest, it is more effective than taking this down on my phone because every time when I begin to play my phone, I will be distracted by other things.

✓ To be honest, it is more effective than writing it down on my phone because whenever I start using my phone, I get distracted by other things.

时态和用法需自然：将“taking this down on my phone”改为“writing it down on my phone”；“every time when I begin to play my phone”非标准，改为“whenever I start using my phone”；“I will be distracted”改为一般现在时“I get distracted”以表达经常发生的情况。建议对表示习惯性的句子使用一般现在时并使用自然搭配。