Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and gives personal detail, but it has grammar mistakes, some redundancy and slightly unnatural phrasing. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), start with a clear topic sentence, and use linking words for coherence. Correct verb forms, remove repeated words, and add a brief concrete example of a memorising technique you use.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising. As a dietitian I review many case studies and see several patients each day, so I practise recalling key details regularly. For example, I use a mental checklist and repeat important facts aloud before appointments, which helps me retain information for longer.

Sugerencia: You answer the question but speech is repetitive and contains unfinished sentence and grammar errors. Avoid repeating linking words (e.g., 'moreover'), finish your thought, and provide a brief specific example of a time you avoided forgetting something using your method. Use varied vocabulary like 'habitually' and correct structures for clarity.

Ejemplo: Not really — I rarely forget important things because I habitually take notes and keep a to-do list on my phone. For instance, I record birthdays and anniversaries and set calendar alarms, so I never miss them.

Sugerencia: Your answer mentions key items but is disorganized, contains repetitions and incomplete sentences. Structure your response: state the main things you must remember, then add 1–2 specific supporting details linked with words like 'also' or 'in addition'. Avoid filler words and finish all sentences.

Ejemplo: I need to remember my children’s daily schedule and my professional appointments. In addition, I must recall patient case details before each consultation so I can prepare treatment plans in advance.

Sugerencia: Good content — you list methods — but grammar and word order are incorrect in places and the answer is slightly repetitive. Use concise sentences, correct verb forms, and link methods logically. Give one specific example of how a method helped you recently.

Ejemplo: I usually write short notes on paper and photograph them with my phone, and I set calendar reminders for important tasks. For example, last week I photographed a medication chart and set an alarm, which prevented me from missing a patient’s follow-up.

× I'm incredible at keeping things in my mind.

✓ I'm incredible at keeping things in my mind.

No correction needed; preposition use is acceptable though 'in my mind' is idiomatic. Keep as is.

× Being a dietitian, I have to go through lots of case studies and meeting many patients per day.

✓ Being a dietitian, I have to go through lots of case studies and meet many patients per day.

Parallel structure error: 'go through' should be followed by a verb in the same form as 'meeting'. Use the base form 'meet' to match 'go through'. To improve, maintain parallel verbs after 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:16

× So I practice all this gradually and learn to the things to keep in my mind for longer time.

✓ So I practice all this gradually and learn the things to keep in my mind for a longer time.

Incorrect use of preposition 'to' after 'learn' and missing article 'a' before 'longer time'. Use 'learn the things' (or better 'learn how to keep things') and 'for a longer time'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Only during my clinic experience I mastered this thing.

✓ Only during my clinic experience did I master this skill.

Tense and word choice: 'mastered this thing' is unnatural; use 'master this skill'. When making a statement with 'only' at the start of a time phrase, use auxiliary 'did' for emphasis in past simple. Also 'clinic experience' can be 'my clinic experience'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Not really, I'm very much habitual of taking notes as well as keeping the little details in my mind.

✓ Not really, I'm in the habit of taking notes and keeping small details in my mind.

Incorrect phrase 'very much habitual of' — use 'in the habit of'. 'Little details' is better as 'small details'. This corrects idiomatic adverb/adjective usage. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Moreover I always carry a phone having long list of all the task I have to do.

✓ Moreover, I always carry a phone with a long list of all the tasks I have to do.

Use 'with' to indicate possession and add articles/plural 'a long list' and 'tasks'. Correct preposition and number agreement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Moreover, a birthday and anniversaries of my dear one are always recorded and put on should you scheduled alarm.

✓ Moreover, the birthdays and anniversaries of my loved ones are always recorded and set as alarms on my phone.

Multiple issues: singular/plural agreement ('birthday' -> 'birthdays', 'anniversaries' -> plural matching), awkward phrase 'my dear one' -> 'my loved ones', and incorrect verb phrase 'put on should you scheduled alarm' corrected to 'set as alarms'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× So, uh, there is no chance that I.

✓ So, uh, there is no chance that I will forget them.

Sentence is incomplete and missing a verb phrase. Complete the idea with appropriate future/modal structure 'will forget them' to convey the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× First and foremost, I have to remember the schedule of my kids so so I prepare them accordingly and when the day starts I have to keep in my mind all the appointments as well as case studies of the patient I'm waiting to.

✓ First and foremost, I have to remember my kids' schedules so I can prepare them accordingly, and when the day starts I have to keep in mind all the appointments as well as the case studies of the patients I'm seeing.

Errors: duplicated 'so', incorrect possessive 'the schedule of my kids' -> 'my kids' schedules', missing auxiliary 'can', awkward 'keep in my mind' -> 'keep in mind', plural 'patients' and verb 'seeing' instead of 'waiting to'. Maintain parallel structure and correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:16

× And thirdly, I have to remember if I have.

✓ And thirdly, I have to remember whether I have any pending tasks or items to bring.

Original sentence is incomplete. Provide a complete clause using 'whether' and specify what must be remembered (pending tasks/items) to make the sentence grammatical and clear. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I'm habitual making some notes on paper or as well as taking picture of that same note in my phone because this is only helped me to remember all the things and moreover, I also love to put a reminder on my phone so that I can be reminded of on time.

✓ I habitually make some notes on paper and also take a picture of the same note on my phone because this only helps me remember things. Moreover, I also like to set a reminder on my phone so that I am reminded on time.

Use adverb 'habitually' and base verbs 'make' and 'take' for parallelism instead of 'making'/'taking'. 'This only helped me' should be present 'helps' to match habitual action. Use 'set a reminder' and 'am reminded on time'. Fix article and preposition usage. Grammar problem type ID:8

× My assistance is also there.

✓ My assistant is also there to help.

'Assistance' (noun meaning help) is incorrectly used where 'assistant' (person) is likely intended. Clarify role and add infinitive 'to help' for completeness. Grammar problem type ID:12