Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can remember streets and routes across Taiwan, so I often travel without using a GPS. This ability helps me navigate cities quickly and avoid getting lost.

Sugerencia: Organize the story into a clear sequence: beginning (what happened), middle (what you tried), and end (the result). Use past tense consistently and reduce hesitations. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I accidentally locked my keys inside my apartment. I realized it late at night and searched everywhere—my bag and pockets—but I couldn't find them. In the end, I had to sleep outside and call a locksmith the next morning.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence and then give specific reasons and a linking word. Correct small grammar errors (article use, plural/singular) and avoid extra words.

Ejemplo: I need to remember meal times and to go to bed on time. Because I often get absorbed in my hobbies, I sometimes skip meals or stay up late, so I set phone reminders to keep a regular routine.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear structure: state your main methods, then give a specific example and use linking words. Avoid repeating words and improve grammar (use 'a calendar' and 'take notes').

Ejemplo: I usually use a calendar app and take written notes to remember important tasks. For example, I enter deadlines in my phone calendar and write short to-do notes, and sometimes I rely on my memory for small things.

× At most my friends, I'm best known for good memory, I can memorize all the streets and roads and literally don't have to watch the Navi navigation while can still can traveling around Taiwan without watching map.

✓ Among my friends, I'm best known for having a good memory; I can memorize all the streets and roads and literally don't have to use GPS while traveling around Taiwan without looking at a map.

Original sentence misused pronouns and possessive phrases ('At most my friends' should be 'Among my friends') and had redundant and incorrect verb forms ('can still can traveling' is ungrammatical). Also 'Navi navigation' is awkward; 'GPS' or 'navigation' is clearer. Use 'having a good memory' as a noun phrase and 'don't have to use GPS' for correct verb usage. Suggestions: restructure the sentence into clear clauses, remove duplicate words, and use correct prepositions ('among').

× Yes, that happens a lot when uh, I I had once locked my key at home and I locked the door and I left.

✓ Yes, that happens a lot; once I locked my keys in the house after locking the door and leaving.

The original mixes tenses awkwardly and uses 'had once locked' where simple past 'once I locked' is more natural for a single past event. 'Locked my key at home' is incorrect collocation; use 'locked my keys in the house' or 'locked my key inside.' Also avoid repeating pronouns and simplify the clause order. Suggestion: use simple past for finished past actions and correct prepositions ('in/inside').

× But after I got back in the midnight, I, I find, I find it everywhere in my bag, in my pocket and everything I could remember, but I could still couldn't find it so I slept outside.

✓ But after I got back at midnight, I searched everywhere—in my bag and in my pockets—and I still couldn't find it, so I slept outside.

Mixes past and present ('I find' should be past 'I searched' or 'I looked'). Use 'at midnight' not 'in the midnight.' 'Everything I could remember' is unclear; replace with 'searched everywhere.' Also 'could still couldn't' is contradictory and ungrammatical; use 'still couldn't.' Suggestions: keep consistent past tense for events, correct prepositions ('at midnight'), and remove redundant words.

× Two things I need to remember are to time to eat and to go to sleep on to bed on time.

✓ Two things I need to remember are when to eat and when to go to bed on time.

Original uses incorrect phrases ('to time to eat', 'to go to sleep on to bed'). Use 'when to eat' and 'when to go to bed' to express timing. 'On time' should follow the verb phrase. Suggestion: use 'when' to indicate timing and 'go to bed' as the idiomatic expression.

× I often get too absorbed in a hobbies that I enjoy that I forgot to have meals or end up staying up until midnight, so I try to set a reminder on my phone to help.

✓ I often get too absorbed in hobbies that I enjoy, and I forget to eat or end up staying up until midnight, so I try to set reminders on my phone to help.

Original has article misuse ('a hobbies' should be 'hobbies' or 'a hobby') and tense inconsistency ('I forgot' should be 'I forget' to match habitual action). Also use plural 'reminders' if more than one. Suggestions: match verb tense for habitual actions (simple present) and use correct article/noun number.

× Normally I would use calendar to take note, taking notes on what, which day should I do something important and another another way is to memorize it because I'm good at memory that memorize things important.

✓ Normally I use a calendar to take notes about which day I should do something important, and another way is to memorize it because I'm good at remembering important things.

Missing article before 'calendar' ('a calendar' or 'the calendar') and awkward phrase 'take note' should be 'take notes.' 'Which day should I do something important' needs normal word order: 'which day I should do something important.' 'Good at memory' is incorrect; use 'good at remembering.' Also remove duplicate 'another another.' Suggestions: include appropriate articles, use correct noun/verb forms ('take notes', 'remembering'), and simplify clauses for clarity.