Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, directly answer, and give one clear supporting detail with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. "I'm just player", "around that's"). Use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, as a chess player I can remember opening moves and past games, which helps me improve. Also, this ability lets me recall schedules and important dates easily.

Sugerencia: Directly answer the question and give a realistic, specific example. Use correct tense and word forms (e.g. "memorising" not "memorizing" depending on variety, avoid doubled words), and link reason to example with words like "because" or "for example".

Ejemplo: No, I rarely forget important things because I use routines and notes. For example, before a tournament I always check my chess set, timetable and travel documents, so I never miss a match.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence listing key items, then give one or two specific reasons why they matter. Use linking words like "and" or "because" and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ejemplo: In daily life I need to remember my phone, my school bag with books, and my chess materials. These items are important because my phone keeps my schedule, my bag contains study materials, and my chess books help me practise.

Sugerencia: Explain a clear, natural method with sequence words (first, then, finally). Correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Give a specific example of using the method.

Ejemplo: First I focus on the important item and repeat it aloud for about a minute, then I visualise it in my mind. For example, before exams I read key facts, say them aloud and write a quick note so I remember them later.

× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things and because I'm just player and I have a quite a good memory, I can tell you about the game which is played in 2007 around that's.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things, and because I'm just a player and I have quite a good memory, I can tell you about the game that was played around 2007.

Errors: missing article before 'player' and awkward clause 'which is played in 2007 around that's'. Use 'a player' (article error) and 'the game that was played around 2007' (correct relative clause and past tense). Also remove extra 'a' before 'quite'. Suggestion: add appropriate articles and reorder the time phrase after 'played'. Grammar problem type ID: 12 and 22

× Uh, no. I've never forgotten some anything in my life because I have a good memorizing.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything in my life because I have a good memory.

Errors: 'some anything' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'good memorizing' should be the noun 'memory'. Also contraction placement and word order improved. Suggestion: use 'anything' alone and the noun 'memory'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I played chess games and I had I know the rules quite good, so I like to see everything clearly and memorize the things.

✓ I played chess and I know the rules quite well, so I like to see everything clearly and memorize things.

Errors: unnecessary past auxiliary 'had' and incorrect adjective 'good' after 'rules' (use adverb 'well' with 'know'); 'chess games' can be 'chess' or 'chess games'—'played chess' is natural; 'memorize the things' is awkward; use 'memorize things'. Suggestion: remove redundant words and use correct adverb form. Grammar problem type ID: 5 and 13

× I only want to remember my chess game rules and my phone, which is very important to do chess practice and my school bag with books about chess games.

✓ I only want to remember my chess rules, my phone, which is very important for chess practice, and my school bag with books about chess.

Errors: 'chess game rules' is awkward—'chess rules' suffices; 'important to do chess practice' should be 'important for chess practice'; unnecessary plural 'chess games' when referring to books about the subject. Also punctuation improved for list clarity. Suggestion: simplify noun phrases and use 'for' with 'important'. Grammar problem type ID: 22 and 11

× Uh, if I think there is a very important thing, I have to memorize it.

✓ If I think something is very important, I have to memorize it.

Original sentence is understandable but word order is awkward. Better to say 'If I think something is very important' rather than 'if I think there is a very important thing'. Suggestion: use clearer noun 'something' and natural word order. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Then I look at the thing for one minute, then it automatically, uh, memorise in my brain.

✓ Then I look at the thing for one minute, and it automatically gets memorized in my brain.

Errors: 'memorise' form and subject agreement—use passive 'gets memorized' or 'is memorized' to indicate the action happens to the information; American spelling 'memorize' is acceptable but tense/form must be passive. Also combine clauses with 'and'. Suggestion: use passive form 'gets memorized' or 'is memorized'. Grammar problem type ID:10 and 9

× Then I just get remembered.

✓ Then I just remember it.

Errors: 'get remembered' is incorrect because the subject should perform the action: 'I remember it.' 'Get remembered' implies others remember the speaker. Also 'it' refers to the item previously mentioned. Suggestion: use active verb 'remember' with direct object. Grammar problem type ID:12 and 6