Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接且自然，但有重复（memorising/memorizing, forget...which I try to memorize）和冗余（actually, always出現多次）。可用一到兩句概述问题，再用一两句具体说明方法并用连词衔接，使回答更简洁流畅。注意动词形式和冠词（a to-do list）。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I rely on my smartphone to keep short notes and reminders. For example, I note down key points or set alerts, which helps me avoid forgetting important details.

Sugerencia: 内容具体且相关，但句子连接不够自然（句子片段“Which made me...”应与前句合并）。结尾单词不全（in.），并可增加一两句说明长期改变或结果。避免夸张词汇累积（quite frustrated and extremely embarrassed），选用一到两个恰当形容词。

Ejemplo: Yes. Once I overslept and missed an important university lecture, which made me feel very embarrassed. Since then I set multiple alarms and go to bed earlier to prevent it happening again.

Sugerencia: 回答含主题句并给出原因和例子，结构良好。但存在小错误和大写问题（A to do list），以及重复概念（alarms already mentioned）。可更具体说明记日程的细节或优先级，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I need to remember daily tasks such as my study schedule because it's crucial for achieving my career goals. For instance, I prioritise tasks in a to-do list app and set alarms for study sessions so I stay on track.

Sugerencia: 回答清晰但稍显冗长并重复前文信息。避免口语填充词（well, actually, super）并注意小写与连字符（to-do list）。可加入更多具体方法或例子（calendar, reminders, recurring alarms）以展示词汇和细节能力。

Ejemplo: I mainly use my smartphone for reminders: I keep a to-do list, set calendar events and recurring alarms, and occasionally write short notes so I don't forget deadlines.

× I always forget some details which I try to memorize.

✓ I always forget some details that I'm trying to memorize.

原句中“which I try to memorize”在语境上表示正在尝试记住的动作，使用一般现在时“try”与“forget”并列会造成时间关系不明确。将“try”改为现在进行时“I'm trying”可以更清楚地表达“我正在尝试记住”的含义，句子更自然。建议在表示正在进行的动作时使用现在进行时。

× After that I started to set multiple alarms in.

✓ After that I started to set multiple alarms.

原句末尾多余介词“in”，导致结构不完整且不符合习惯用法。固定搭配是“set alarms”或“set multiple alarms”，不需要“in”。建议删除错误的介词。

× For example, I always set alarms and keep A to do list on my mobile phones.

✓ For example, I always set alarms and keep a to-do list on my mobile phone.

原句中“A to do list”中大写A不恰当且“to do”应连字符形成“to-do list”；另外“mobile phones”与上下文中的单人持有不符，应用单数“mobile phone”。此外不定冠词应为小写“a”。建议注意冠词大小写、连字符以及名词单复数一致性。

× Which made me feel quite frustrated and extremely embarrassed.

✓ This made me feel quite frustrated and extremely embarrassed.

原句以关系代词短句开头“Which made me...”，导致句子碎片（从句没有先行词）。应使用指示代词“This”或将其与前句合并为完整句。建议避免用“Which”引导独立的句子片段，改用“This”或重写为复合句。

× Well, actually I always use my smartphone to help me remember better on a daily basis, such as writing some short notes and keeping A to do list because it's super convenient.

✓ Well, actually I always use my smartphone to help me remember better on a daily basis, such as writing some short notes and keeping a to-do list because it's super convenient.

原句主要问题是冠词与连字符（见前述）以及冗余表达。这里时态（一般现在时）本身正确，但要把“A to do list”改为“a to-do list”。建议注意名词短语的正确书写和冠词使用。