Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct small grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (memorising/memorizing).

Ejemplo: Yes, I am fairly good at memorizing things. For example, during my medical degree I learned many anatomical names and used repeat practice and mnemonics to retain them, which helped me perform well in exams.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity and grammar: give a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly what happened with specific reasons and consequences. Use correct tense and pronouns, and avoid unclear phrases like 'I forwarded that it was my birthday'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my own birthday during a particularly stressful study week. I was so focused on exams and assignments that I only remembered it when my mother called me in the evening, which made me feel embarrassed but taught me to plan small reminders.

Sugerencia: Be more direct: start with a clear topic sentence naming what you need to remember daily, then give a specific example and explain why, using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I try to remember a short positive affirmation each morning, such as 'You are doing great today,' because it boosts my confidence and helps me follow my daily plan calmly and productively.

Sugerencia: Good range of practical methods; improve grammar and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence, then list methods with linking phrases (for example, first, second) and give one short reason for each method to add specificity.

Ejemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I put events in my phone calendar for reminders, write tasks on sticky notes and place them where I will see them in the morning, and ask a friend to remind me if something is critical.

× I would say I am fairly good at memorizing things.

✓ I would say I am fairly good at memorizing things.

No correction needed; sentence uses present simple to describe a general ability, which is appropriate.

× With my medical degree background, I have to memorise a lot of facts and this can be seen through the vast names of human structure which is a part of syllabus in my study.

✓ With my medical degree background, I have had to memorise a lot of facts, and this can be seen in the many names of human structures that are part of the syllabus in my studies.

Article and count noun errors: 'vast names' is awkward and 'human structure' should be plural 'human structures'. Use 'part of the syllabus' -> 'part of the syllabus in my studies'. Also tense adjusted to 'have had to' for ongoing requirement; include commas and change 'through' to 'in'. Suggestion: make nouns agree in number and use appropriate prepositions and articles.

× I did. In fact it was my birthday that I forgot it was because back in my study years.

✓ I did. In fact, it was my birthday that I forgot because I was busy during my years of study.

Sentence structure and tense: 'that I forgot it was because back in my study years' is ungrammatical. Use past simple 'I forgot' and clarify reason with 'because I was busy during my years of study'. Add comma after 'In fact'.

× I think it's because of a lot of thing that happened during that week.

✓ I think it's because of a lot of things that happened during that week.

Count noun error: 'a lot of thing' should be 'a lot of things' because 'things' is plural. Maintain past tense 'happened'.

× At the end of the week I was relieved that it ended and I forwarded that it was my birthday and my mother have to.

✓ At the end of the week I was relieved that it was over, and I realised it was my birthday; my mother had also realised it.

Original sentence is ungrammatical: 'forwarded that it was my birthday' is incorrect verb choice; 'have to' is wrong. Use 'realised' for becoming aware and 'had also realised' for past perfect agreement. Ensure clause connectors and punctuation.

× This question is quite general, but if I have to say about it, I think I would choose to remember something that made me confident and feel good the first thing in the morning.

✓ This question is quite general, but if I had to answer it, I would say I try to remember something that makes me feel confident and good first thing in the morning.

Tense and verb choice: use conditional 'if I had to answer' and present simple 'makes' for habitual effect. 'Choose to remember' changed to 'try to remember' for naturalness.

× So for the rest of the day I would do my plan smoothly.

✓ So for the rest of the day I can follow my plan smoothly.

Modal and verb choice: 'would do my plan' is unnatural. Use 'can follow my plan' or 'I can carry out my plan smoothly' to express consequence. Maintain present modal for habitual result.

× It's like quotes. You are doing great today.

✓ It's like a quote: 'You are doing great today.'

Article and punctuation: 'quotes' should be singular 'a quote' if referring to one motivational phrase. Also quotes around the example phrase clarify meaning. Use colon to introduce the example.

× I remember important things through a various method.

✓ I remember important things through various methods.

'A various method' is ungrammatical: 'various' is plural so remove 'a' and pluralise 'method' to 'methods'.

× I would put it in my phone calendar or just simply write it down or the sticky notes and paste it somewhere that I can see the first thing in the morning.

✓ I would put it in my phone calendar, simply write it down on sticky notes, and paste them somewhere I can see first thing in the morning.

Preposition and article errors: use 'on sticky notes' not 'or the sticky notes'; coordinate list with commas and 'and'. Pluralize 'them' to agree with 'sticky notes'. Remove redundant 'just' for clarity.

× Or I can just remind my friends to remind me again next day.

✓ Or I can ask my friends to remind me again the next day.

Pronoun and verb choice: 'remind my friends to remind me' is awkward; 'ask my friends to remind me' is clearer. Add 'the' before 'next day' to form 'the next day'.