Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article errors (e.g., "I usually forget", "a fixed place"). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Not really. I often forget where I put small items like paperwork or my phone, so I now keep them in a fixed place at home to avoid losing them.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and coherent: give a direct topic sentence, then explain the method you use with a clear example. Remove redundant phrases and fix grammar (e.g., "I'm not good at remembering things"; avoid "although...but").

Ejemplo: I haven't forgotten anything truly important because I save key information on my phone. For example, I use the reminder app to record exam dates and set alerts so I never miss them.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Correct word choice and spelling ("product launch" not "lunch"). Use linking words to list responsibilities (e.g., "for example", "also"). Reduce hesitations (uh) for fluency.

Ejemplo: As a marketing specialist, I need to remember product launch timelines and campaign deadlines. I also need to remember to contact customers and follow up on leads.

Sugerencia: Be grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example. Fix verb forms and wording ("I record them on my iPhone"; "to remind me how much time is left"). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "recommend I would".

Ejemplo: I record important dates and tasks on my iPhone using the Reminders app. For instance, I add exam dates with alerts so the app tells me how much time is left before the exam.

× I usually forgot where I put my paperwork or my case, so nowadays I used to put them in a fixed places.

✓ I usually forget where I put my paperwork or my case, so nowadays I put them in fixed places.

The sentence mixes past tense ('forgot', 'used to') with present habitual meaning. Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions. Also 'used to' indicates a past habit and is not appropriate with 'nowadays'. 'a fixed places' has article and number errors; 'fixed places' (no article) or 'a fixed place' are correct. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits and match singular/plural with articles.

× Well, although I'm not good at memory things, but I have never forgotten something really important to me since I usually record the important issues on my iPhone or on record or on reminder apps.

✓ Well, although I'm not good at remembering things, I have never forgotten anything really important to me since I usually record important issues on my iPhone or in reminder apps.

Use 'remembering' (verb) with 'good at' not noun 'memory things'. Remove redundant conjunctions ('although' and 'but' together). 'Something really important' is better as 'anything really important' after 'never'. Use 'in reminder apps' rather than 'on record or on reminder apps' and omit unnecessary words. This fixes adjective/usage and sentence structure.

× For example, when I have an important exam I would record.

✓ For example, when I have an important exam I record it.

'Would' is unnecessary and suggests conditional/habit in the past. Use simple present 'record' for habitual or scheduled actions. Also include object 'it'. Alternatively 'I would record it' could be acceptable in habitual past, but here present is required.

× I need to remember the timeline of the products lunch and besides, I also need to remember, uh, to contact my, uh, customers.

✓ I need to remember the timeline of the product launches and, besides, I also need to remember to contact my customers.

'products lunch' is incorrect word order and word choice; use 'product launches'. Use 'the timeline of the product launches' and 'remember to contact' (infinitive) rather than 'remember ... to contact' with extra commas. Remove filler words. 'Besides' should be set off by commas.

× I remember important things by record them in my iPhones or reminder apps.

✓ I remember important things by recording them in my iPhone or reminder apps.

After 'by' use the -ing form 'recording'. Use singular 'my iPhone' unless the speaker has multiple; consistency matters. Also use 'them' as object of 'recording'.

× For example, when I have an important exam I would recommend I would record it in my reminder app to remind me how many time left.

✓ For example, when I have an important exam I record it in my reminder app to remind me how much time is left.

'Recommend' is incorrect here and likely a slip; remove it. Use 'how much time is left' (uncountable 'time' with 'much') and include 'is' for the clause. Use simple present 'record' for habitual action. This corrects preposition and tense and fixes word choice.