Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答总体能传达意思，但有明显语法和拼写错误，句子较冗长且衔接不够自然。建议：1) 注意动词形式与主谓一致（例如 remember → remembering; member → remember）。2) 将长句拆成主题句加一两句支持信息，避免重复词（like/so/is）。3) 使用连接词使逻辑更清晰（e.g. however, but, therefore）。4) 控制句子数在最多5句，词汇稍作提升（e.g. details → specific details）。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. I can easily remember things that interest me, such as stories and experiences. However, I struggle with remembering numbers and small details, so if something is important I usually write it down or set a reminder.

Sugerencia: 内容能表达忘记重要事情的经历，但语法错误和措辞不当明显（e.g. was missed → missed; don't check the candle → likely meant calendar or didn't check my calendar）。建议：1) 使用正确时态（past simple）描述过去事件；2) 用清晰的词汇表达原因（calendar, schedule, reminders）；3) 补充一两句感受或结果并用连接词衔接。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I missed an important appointment because I didn't check my calendar. I felt upset and stressed at the time, especially as I usually write things down and set reminders, so it was unusual for me to forget.

Sugerencia: 回答内容含混且有多处用词错误（apartments? past words?），句子结构混乱。建议：1) 明确列出日常需要记住的事项（e.g. appointments, deadlines, tasks）；2) 用具体例子解释（e.g. grocery list, meeting times）；3) 修正词汇错误并把句子分成主题句和支持句，使用连接词。

Ejemplo: In daily life I need to remember appointments, deadlines and my plans for the day. For example, I usually note down meeting times and shopping lists. Because my memory is not very reliable, I often write important things in my phone or use a planner.

Sugerencia: 回答直接且实用，但有重复和口语化的小问题（like I like like）。建议：1) 避免重复词并丰富表达（e.g. use apps, digital calendar, alarms）；2) 用连接词说明不同方法的用途（for example, I use notes for lists and alarms for deadlines）；3) 保持句子简洁且自然。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down and rely on my phone. For example, I use note apps to keep lists and set reminders or alarms for specific deadlines so I don't forget.

× If I'm pretty good at remember things I'm interested in like stories and experiences, but I'm not very good at member numbers and small details, so is something is really important I will choose to write them down.

✓ If I'm pretty good at remembering things I'm interested in, like stories and experiences, but I'm not very good at remembering numbers and small details, so if something is really important I will choose to write it down.

句中應使用動詞的 -ing 形式來與介詞 at 搭配，表示擅長的行為："good at remembering" 而不是 "good at remember"。同時 "member numbers" 為錯誤拼寫，應為 "remember numbers" 或直接 "numbers"。最後從句中 "is something" 為語序錯誤，應為 "if something"，主語代詞 "them" 指代單一事物應改為 "it"。建議：學習常見介詞後接的動詞形式（例如 good at + -ing），注意拼寫並檢查從句語序。

× Yes I have. I was missed an important appointment because I don't check the candle.

✓ Yes I have. I missed an important appointment because I didn't check the calendar.

此處描述過去發生的事情，應使用一般過去時 "missed" 而不是被動式 "was missed"。另外原句 "don't check the candle" 兩處錯誤：時態不一致（應為過去式 didn't check）和單詞拼寫錯誤（calendar 而非 candle）。建議：敘述已發生事件時使用一般過去時，並注意單詞拼寫。

× At that time I felt a bit upset and stressed since I made a habit to write everything down and set reminders.

✓ At that time I felt a bit upset and stressed since I had made a habit of writing everything down and setting reminders.

此處需表達在過去某個時間點之前已經形成的習慣，應用過去完成時 "had made" 以顯示時間先後關係；另外習慣後接動名詞形式，應為 "habit of writing" 和 "setting reminders"。建議：注意事件時間順序，習慣和持續性的表述常用 "have/has/had made a habit of + -ing"。

× In my daily life I really to remember some everyday stuff like apartments, deadlines and some small plans for the day for some.

✓ In my daily life I really need to remember some everyday stuff like appointments, deadlines and some small plans for the day.

原句缺少主要動詞，應補上 "need" 並使用不定詞 "to remember" 或直接動詞結構 "need to remember"。另外單詞拼寫錯誤："apartments" 應為 "appointments"（約會/行程），句末多餘片語 "for some" 應刪除。建議：檢查句子是否有主要動詞並注意常見單詞拼寫，確保句子完整。

× I also need to remember some practice things like past words for different apps.

✓ I also need to remember some practical things like passwords for different apps.

原句 "practice things" 用詞不當，應為 "practical things"（實用的事情）；且 "past words" 明顯拼寫或詞彙錯誤，應為 "passwords"（密碼）。這兩處不是時態問題，但涉及詞形和名詞選擇，根據題單范圍可視為動詞及詞形相關調整。建議：注意近似詞的區別（practical vs. practice）並檢查音近詞/拼寫錯誤（passwords）。

× For some important things I will choose to write them down because my memory is not very good.

✓ For some important things I will choose to write them down because my memory is not very good.

該句語法基本正確，但可以更自然地說為 "I choose to write them down" 或保留原句。此處不需更改，僅提醒：動詞搭配和代詞使用（them 指代多項事物）皆正確。

× I will write them down. My memory isn't very good so I rely a lot on my phone. Like I like like notes and reminders for very important things.

✓ I will write them down. My memory isn't very good so I rely a lot on my phone. For example, I like notes and reminders for very important things.

原句中的重複 "like like" 顯然是口誤或筆誤，應刪去重複。句首使用 "Like" 口語化且不完整，應改為更正式的連接詞或過渡語如 "For example"。此外 "rely a lot on my phone" 正確，整體需修正口語重複及連接詞使句子更合規。建議：注意口語錄音或寫作時的重複詞，使用合適的過渡詞來連接例子。

× I also set an alarm to remind me.

✓ I also set an alarm to remind me.

該句語法正確；"set an alarm to remind me" 用法恰當。無需更改。