Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memorizing thing”应为“memorizing things”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复和冗余，同时注意句子连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have to remember many subjects like math, geography, and Chinese in high school. I usually perform well in all of them, which shows my strong memory skills.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，确保表达清楚且连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my identity card at the airport. After passing security, I realized it was missing when I was waiting to board the plane.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，如“because a university student”应为“because I am a university student”，且部分表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，表达更清晰具体。

Ejemplo: As a university student, I need to remember the time and location of my classes. Also, I have to keep track of assignment deadlines and remember my professors' names.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“remember it remember it”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually write important things down in my notebook because writing by hand helps me remember better. I also tell my best friend or family about my tasks so they can remind me if needed.

× I think I'm good at memorizing thing because we're not in Senior High School.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing things because we're not in Senior High School.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为表示的是多个记忆的事物。

× I need to remember 9 subject of class such as math, geography and Chinese.

✓ I need to remember 9 subjects of class such as math, geography and Chinese.

subject应使用复数subjects，因为有多个科目。

× But each subject I can all do well.

✓ But I can do well in each subject.

原句结构不正确，且each subject后不应加all，改为I can do well in each subject更通顺。

× So I think my memorable ability is very good.

✓ So I think my memory ability is very good.

memorable ability用词不当，应改为memory ability表示记忆能力。

× There's one time I went to the airport and after the security check we go to wait for in board the plant and then I found my credit card was my, my identity card was gone.

✓ There was one time I went to the airport and after the security check we went to wait to board the plane and then I found my credit card and my identity card were gone.

时态应保持一致，描述过去事件应使用过去时。go改为went，plant应为plane，且句子结构需调整。

× after the security check we go to wait for in board the plant

✓ after the security check we went to wait to board the plane

介词使用错误，应该是wait to board而不是wait for in board，plant拼写错误，应为plane。

× my credit card was my, my identity card was gone.

✓ my credit card and my identity card were gone.

两个物品应使用复数谓语were，且and连接两个名词。

× In my opinion, I need to remember what time I need to go to class and where the classroom is because a university student.

✓ In my opinion, I need to remember what time I need to go to class and where the classroom is because I am a university student.

缺少主语I，导致句子结构不完整。

× I want to hand it over to time

✓ I want to hand it in on time

短语错误，正确表达是hand in（提交），并且是on time（准时）。

× I also need to remember the teachers.

✓ I also need to remember the teachers.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× I usually write down them on my notebook.

✓ I usually write them down in my notebook.

write down是动词短语，write down them顺序错误，应为write them down；记笔记用in而非on。

× I usually write down them on my notebook.

✓ I usually write them down in my notebook.

介词使用错误，应该用in my notebook而不是on my notebook。

× I think write down by hand will help me remember it remember it well

✓ I think writing things down by hand will help me remember them well

动词形式错误，应使用动名词writing things down；重复remember it；it应改为them指代多项内容。

× I also will tell my best friend or my family what I need to do so they will remind me the important thing.

✓ I will also tell my best friend or my family what I need to do so they will remind me of the important things.

动词will的位置调整更自然；remind后应加介词of；thing应为复数things。