Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and concise supporting details. Use correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid vague phrases. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and be specific about typical conditions. For example, say how often weather changes and mention common temperatures or seasons.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live changes a lot; we often have rainy and cloudy days, especially during the monsoon. Temperatures are usually mild, between 20–30°C, so the climate feels quite pleasant most of the year.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give 1–2 clear, relevant reasons using correct grammar and linking words (because, so). Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use appropriate vocabulary for feelings and activities.

Ejemplo: I prefer mildly cool weather because it is comfortable for daily activities and I can dress in light layers. Also, cooler days make me enjoy hot drinks and outdoor walks, whereas very hot weather often makes me feel tired and less active.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific reasons with correct word choice (dry, not drive) and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and give concrete examples (clothes dry faster, easier travel). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because my clothes dry quickly in sunlight and it makes household chores easier. Dry conditions also help when I go out, since roads are less slippery and travel is more convenient.

Sugerencia: Give a clear frequency and describe how you check the forecast using correct grammar. Use one sentence for frequency and one for method/purpose. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I check the weather forecast several times a day, especially in the morning and before going out. I usually use a weather app on my phone because it shows temperature, rain probability and alerts so I can plan my day.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about major effects, then give 2–3 specific consequences using accurate vocabulary (temperature rise, extreme weather, sea level rise). Use linking words (for example, such as, because) and avoid vague or incorrect terms like 'stroke' unless you mean 'storms' or 'heatwaves'.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused higher average temperatures and more frequent extreme weather events. For example, we now see stronger storms, longer heatwaves and increased air pollution, which harm health and agriculture.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you would like to visit, then give a specific example and reason. Use correct tense and clearer sentence structure, and avoid repetition. Mention what you hope to experience (cooler climate, beaches, mountains).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I often go from Jaipur to Udaipur during summer to enjoy its cooler, cloudier weather and a change from the hot conditions at home.

× Weather is totally changed many times but sometimes it like rainy and cloudy weather so always like very good weather.

✓ The weather has changed many times, but sometimes it is rainy and cloudy, so it is not always very good.

Multiple sentence structure issues: missing article and auxiliary, incorrect verb tense, and unclear phrasing. Use present perfect 'has changed' for recent repeated changes, include subject+verb 'it is' for clarity, and join clauses with commas. Avoid using 'like' repeatedly and ambiguous 'always like very good weather.' Suggestion: Break long ideas into shorter clauses and use correct auxiliaries.

× I prefer mildly slightly cool weather because it comfortable for daily activities and I can enjoy.

✓ I prefer slightly cool weather because it is comfortable for daily activities and I can enjoy them.

Redundant adverbs 'mildly slightly' should be reduced to one ('slightly'). Missing verb 'is' before 'comfortable' and unclear object after 'enjoy' — add 'them' referring to activities. Suggestion: Use one modifier and ensure linking verb is present.

× I may use I can lay layer clothes easily for example.

✓ I can wear layers of clothing easily, for example.

Incorrect pronoun and verbs: 'I may use I can' is ungrammatical. 'Lay layer clothes' is wrong collocation; use 'wear layers of clothing.' Suggestion: Use correct verb 'wear' and plural 'layers'.

× I enjoy break smoke at them when I air fills cold weather.

✓ I enjoy taking smoke breaks when the air gets cold.

Pronoun 'them' is unclear; word order and verb forms are incorrect. 'Air fills cold weather' is ungrammatical — use 'when the air gets cold.' 'Taking smoke breaks' is natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use clear subject and verb sequence.

× Also let's enjoy hot drinks and crazy indoor times where very hot weather often make me feel lazy.

✓ I also enjoy hot drinks and fun indoor activities because very hot weather often makes me feel lazy.

Misuse of 'let's' (invitation) and 'crazy indoor times' is informal/awkward. Subject-verb agreement: 'weather... make' should be 'makes.' Replace 'where' with causal 'because.' Suggestion: Use appropriate conjunctions and correct verb agreement.

× I prefer drive with dry weather it help me when I am my washing my clothes and in sunlight they are easily home and many things it affect the dry weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it helps me when I wash my clothes; in sunlight they dry easily, and many things are affected by dry weather.

Run-on sentence with wrong verb forms: 'drive with dry weather' is wrong collocation; use 'prefer dry weather.' Subject-verb agreement: 'it help' -> 'it helps.' Unclear clause 'I am my washing my clothes' corrected to 'I wash my clothes.' 'They are easily home' should be 'they dry easily.' Suggestion: Break into clauses, correct collocations and subject-verb agreement.

× It help me on plants also.

✓ It also helps my plants.

Awkward preposition 'on' and missing subject-verb agreement: 'help' -> 'helps.' More natural order is 'helps my plants.' Suggestion: Use correct verb form and natural word order.

× So for me dry weather is perfect.

✓ So, for me, dry weather is perfect.

Minor punctuation and clarity: add commas for readability. Sentence is otherwise acceptable. Suggestion: Use commas to set off introductory phrase.

× Many times and the sunlight is very on High Peak then I'm then I check my weather conditions in my digital mobile homes and it helped me providing the information about the way the changes so I can I may I prepare for this.

✓ I check the weather many times, especially when the sunlight is at its peak. I check the forecast on my mobile phone, and it helps me know how conditions are changing so I can prepare.

Problems: misplaced adverb 'many times' and odd phrase 'sunlight is very on High Peak.' 'Digital mobile homes' is incorrect; use 'mobile phone.' Tense inconsistency: 'it helped me providing' -> 'it helps me know' or 'it helped me by providing.' Remove repeated filler 'I may I.' Suggestion: Use clear time markers, correct nouns, and consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× In recent time there are lot of change in climate and many time many like if it effect on pollution and there are many stroke and sunlight is on a peak temperature are more heated so earth is totally warm effect from the climate change.

✓ Recently there have been a lot of changes in the climate. These changes affect pollution and heat waves; temperatures have risen, so the Earth is getting warmer because of climate change.

Tense and agreement errors: use present perfect 'have been' for recent changes. 'A lot of change' -> 'a lot of changes.' Misuse of 'many stroke' unclear; likely 'heat waves' or 'strokes' -> use 'heat waves.' Subject-verb agreement and word choice ('are more heated') corrected to 'temperatures have risen.' Suggestion: Use precise nouns and correct tense for recent trends.

× Ation time I'm living in Jaipur so at the summer I am going to Udaipur the famous for her weather condition.

✓ At present I live in Jaipur, so in the summer I go to Udaipur, which is famous for its weather.

Several article and vocabulary errors: 'Ation time' is unclear -> 'At present.' Use simple present 'I live' for current state. 'At the summer' -> 'in the summer.' 'Going to Udaipur the famous for her weather condition' needs relative clause 'which is famous for its weather.' Pronoun 'her' for city -> 'its.' Suggestion: Use correct time expressions and articles, and use 'its' for inanimate nouns.

× Always a rainy season and clouds are in on a good good climate.

✓ It is usually rainy and cloudy during the monsoon, which creates pleasant weather.

Unclear phrasing 'Always a rainy season and clouds are in on a good good climate.' Use 'usually rainy and cloudy' and specify 'monsoon' or 'rainy season.' Remove repeated 'good.' Suggestion: Use clear subjects and verbs and avoid repetition.

× So I many times I am going to different cities for their experience for cloud and weather.

✓ So I often travel to different cities to experience different cloud patterns and weather.

Awkward word order 'So I many times I am going' should be 'I often travel.' Use infinitive 'to experience' and plural 'cloud patterns.' Suggestion: Use adverbs of frequency correctly and natural verb phrases.