Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct some unnatural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid informal or slightly awkward expressions like “digging my nose into.” Also try to vary vocabulary (e.g., “fragrance” instead of “scent”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because of their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrance. For example, when I walk past flower stalls I often pause to enjoy the scent, especially of roses. I find their beauty really cheers me up.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, moreover, in particular) and correct grammar (e.g., avoid repeating subjects). Be specific about examples and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, both my mother and my mother-in-law love flowers. My mother enjoys caring for flowering plants at home, and my mother-in-law often brings me bouquets when we meet, which I really appreciate.

Sugerencia: Make the response clearer and eliminate repetition. Start with a direct statement about where you live, then contrast with your hometown using a linking word (however/whereas). Use correct place name spelling and concise phrasing.

Ejemplo: I live in Chuncheon in South Korea, and there are many flowers and trees throughout the city. However, my hometown has fewer flowering plants, so the urban parks here feel much more colorful.

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repeated filler words. Use linking words to explain reasons and add one clear example about frequency or context. Correct phrasing such as “I find I have” and “I prefer taking photos to looking at them.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph flowers because I love their vivid colors. In fact, my phone is full of flower photos; I usually take them while walking in parks, even though I rarely look back at them.

Sugerencia: Correct factual phrasing and use concise, natural expressions. Begin with a clear statement about cultural practice, then give specific examples and avoid awkward or incorrect names (e.g., 'Romans country' is unclear). Use linking words like 'for example' and keep sentences to a maximum of four.

Ejemplo: Yes, sending flowers is quite common in Italy. For example, partners often give flowers as a romantic gesture, sometimes on ordinary days as a surprise rather than only on special occasions.

× I find myself while I walk on the street digging my nose into flowers when they have a particularly sweet scent that I like.

✓ I find myself, while walking on the street, burying my nose in flowers when they have a particularly sweet scent that I like.

Original uses 'while I walk' plus 'digging' awkwardly. Use of 'while walking' with a gerund phrase is more natural. 'Digging my nose into' is informal and slightly unidiomatic; 'burying my nose in' is a common collocation. The correction keeps present-tense habitual meaning and uses correct gerund form for the simultaneous action. Suggestion: use 'while walking' or 'when I walk' plus a verb in -ing if describing a simultaneous habitual action.

× My mother and my mother in law they love flowers.

✓ My mother and my mother-in-law love flowers.

The original repeats the subject ('My mother and my mother in law' and 'they') which creates a clause structure error and redundancy. Combine the two coordinated nouns as subject and remove the extra pronoun. Also hyphenate 'mother-in-law.' Suggestion: avoid repeating the subject; use 'My X and Y verb...'.

× My mum especially likes even plants with flowers.

✓ My mum especially likes plants that have flowers.

Original word order 'especially likes even plants with flowers' is awkward. 'Especially likes' agrees with third-person singular 'mum' but placement of 'even' is incorrect. The correction preserves third-person singular and clarifies meaning by using a relative clause 'plants that have flowers.' Suggestion: place adverbs like 'especially' before the verb and use clear noun phrases.

× Also my mother in law I remember also the last time I met her she gave me a bunch of flowers.

✓ Also, I remember the last time I met my mother-in-law she gave me a bunch of flowers.

Original has awkward word order and missing commas; 'my mother in law I remember also' should be reordered. The verb 'gave' is simple past which is correct for a past event; the issue is sentence structure and punctuation rather than verb form, but it fits best under reordering and past event clarity. Correction fixes word order and punctuation. Suggestion: place time expressions ('the last time I met...') near the verb and use commas to separate introductory elements.

× I actually live in South Korea in Shun Chung and there are quite a lot of flowers around the cities around the city there are many plants and many trees so there are many, many flowers, but in my hometown, they're not as much as flowers as here.

✓ I actually live in South Korea, in Shun Chung, and there are quite a lot of flowers in the city. There are many plants and trees, so there are many flowers, but in my hometown there are not as many flowers as here.

Original repeats phrases ('around the cities around the city') and uses incorrect quantifier 'not as much as flowers' instead of 'not as many flowers.' Use 'many' for countable nouns like 'flowers.' Add commas for clarity. Also 'in the city' is clearer than 'around the cities around the city.' Suggestion: use 'many' with countable nouns and avoid redundant phrases; split long sentences for clarity.

× I do take photos of flowers because I really like their vibrant colors.

✓ I do take photos of flowers because I really like their vibrant colors.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. 'Do take' is emphatic but correct. No error per provided list. Suggestion: keep as is or simplify to 'I take photos...'.

× Even though actually I find myself having a bunch of flower pictures on my phone and even though I don't look at them I keep taking pictures of those flowers because I think I like more the taking the picture itself than rewatching the picture.

✓ Actually, I have a bunch of flower pictures on my phone and, even though I don't look at them, I keep taking pictures because I think I prefer taking the picture itself to rewatching it.

Original overuses 'even though' and has awkward phrasing 'I find myself having' and 'I like more the taking the picture itself.' Use simple present 'I have' for possession and 'prefer X to Y' for expressing preference. 'Rewatching the picture' can be shortened to 'rewatching it.' Suggestion: avoid repetitive connectors and use standard comparative structures like 'prefer A to B.'

× Yes, that's what quite common.

✓ Yes, that's quite common.

Original 'that's what quite common' includes an extraneous 'what.' Remove it to form the correct clause 'that's quite common.' Suggestion: avoid inserting unnecessary words like 'what' in fixed expressions.

× I am Italian and Italy is known as the Romans country.

✓ I am Italian, and Italy is known as the Roman country.

Original 'Romans country' incorrectly uses plural noun 'Romans' as an adjective. Use the adjective 'Roman' to modify 'country.' Alternatively, say 'the country of the Romans' but 'Roman country' is more natural. Add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: convert national/cultural nouns to adjectives when modifying another noun (Roman, Italian, Chinese).

× Therefore, usually boys or husbands, boyfriends or even someone that is trying to get a girl they tend to gift flowers, not just in special occasions but even like a normal day as a surprise or as an act of romance.

✓ Therefore, usually boys, husbands, boyfriends, or even someone trying to win a girl's affection tend to give flowers, not just on special occasions but even on a normal day as a surprise or as an act of romance.

Multiple issues: unnecessary pronoun 'they' after subject list (sentence structure), 'that is trying' should be 'trying' (use of -ing after subject), and 'gift' as a verb is less natural than 'give.' Prepositions: use 'on special occasions' and 'on a normal day.' Correction streamlines the subject list, removes redundant 'they,' uses present-tense habitual 'tend to give,' and fixes prepositions. Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns, use participle clauses for modifiers, and use correct prepositions 'on' for days/occasions.