Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 文法と発音の誤り（makes → make、主語と動詞の一致）を直し、冗長な表現を整理して自然な流れにしてください。また、具体性を少し増やすと説得力が上がります（どんな花か、どのようにリラックスするか等）。短くても論理的なつながりを示す接続詞を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I love flowers because they make me feel relaxed and refreshed. For example, I often go to the nearby park on weekends to walk among roses and cherry trees, and the peaceful atmosphere helps me unwind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: 文法、語順、代名詞の一致に大きな誤りがあります（単数・複数形、he/sheの混同、動詞形grow/ grows、名詞の複数形flowersなど）。まず短く正確な主文を作り、それから理由や具体例を接続詞で付け加えてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. One of my friends loves flowers and grows them at home because she enjoys watching them grow and finds gardening very relaxing.

Sugerencia: 繰り返しや曖昧な語（most most、feelの目的語不在）を減らし、文法（places are used）を直してください。主張→理由→希望という順序は良いので、理由を具体的に示す表現や短い例を加えると良くなります。

Ejemplo: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because I live in the city center and most spaces are used for buildings and roads. I wish there were more parks and green spaces so residents could relax and enjoy nature.

Sugerencia: 最後の文が未完で意味が伝わりません。理由を完全な文で述べ、語彙を明確にしてください（outing → outings、find something very what?）。代替表現を使って頻度や条件をはっきりさせましょう。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually photograph flowers. I prefer taking photos of my friends during outings because those pictures remind me of good memories. I only take photos of flowers occasionally when I see something particularly beautiful or unusual.

Sugerencia: 過度のフィラー（uh）を避け、語順と冠詞の使い方（a person、anniversaries）を修正してください。典型的な場面を挙げるのは良いので、より自然で整理された列挙（for example: birthdays, anniversaries and retirements）を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: I'm not entirely sure, but many people do send flowers in my country, especially for occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries and retirements. For example, it's common to give flowers to someone who is leaving their job.

× Yes I do. I love flowers because they makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

✓ Yes I do. I love flowers because they make me feel relaxed and refreshed.

The verb 'make' must agree with the plural subject 'flowers'. In present simple third person singular forms only add -s when the subject is singular (he/she/it). Here the subject is plural, so use the base form 'make'. Suggestion: Identify the subject (singular or plural) and choose the correct verb form; practice subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× For example, I often go to the nearby park on weekends to walk among the flowers and tall trees.

✓ For example, I often go to the nearby park on weekends to walk among the flowers and tall trees.

No grammatical error detected regarding tense; sentence is correct in present simple to describe habitual actions. Suggestion: Maintain present simple for regular habits.

× Also, I enjoy their scent which helps me forget.

✓ Also, I enjoy their scent which helps me forget my worries.

The verb 'forget' needs an object to be clear. Adding 'my worries' clarifies what is being forgotten. Suggestion: Ensure verbs that commonly take objects have clear objects; add the specific thing being forgotten.

× Yes I know one my friend loves flower are he he enjoy growing them and she he said that he also enjoy seeing them growth so he grow grows them at home.

✓ Yes, I know one friend who loves flowers. He enjoys growing them, and he said that he also enjoys seeing them grow, so he grows them at home.

Multiple errors: incorrect pronoun and relative clause formation ('one my friend' -> 'one friend who'); noun number ('flower' -> 'flowers'); third person singular verb forms require -s ('enjoy' -> 'enjoys', 'grow' -> 'grows'); wrong noun form 'growth' where verb 'grow' is needed; extra/mistyped pronouns removed. Suggestion: Break long ideas into short sentences, use 'who' after 'friend', use plural nouns when speaking generally, and apply third person -s for he/she/it.

× No, there aren't many flowers in my city because I live in the city center, uh, where most most places is used for buildings and roads.

✓ No, there aren't many flowers in my city because I live in the city center, where most places are used for buildings and roads.

Subject-verb agreement with 'places' (plural) requires 'are' not 'is'. Duplicate word 'most' removed. Suggestion: Match 'be' verb to subject number and proofread for repeated words.

× I wish there were more parks and green spaces so residents could feel.

✓ I wish there were more parks and green spaces so residents could feel relaxed.

The verb 'feel' lacks a complement; 'feel' is intransitive here but needs an adjective to complete the thought (e.g., 'relaxed'). Suggestion: Complete verbs of sensation with appropriate adjectives or objects.

× No, I don't usually photograph flowers.

✓ No, I don't usually photograph flowers.

Sentence is correct in present simple to describe habitual action. Suggestion: Continue using present simple for habits.

× I prefer taking photos of my friends during outing because these photos remind me of good memories.

✓ I prefer taking photos of my friends during outings because these photos remind me of good memories.

Count noun 'outing' should be plural 'outings' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use plural for general repeated events; check noun countability.

× Sometimes I only take flower photos when I find something very.

✓ Sometimes I only take photos of flowers when I find something very beautiful.

The sentence ends abruptly; 'very' requires an adjective to modify. Adding 'beautiful' completes the idea. Suggestion: Ensure modifiers like 'very' modify adjectives; finish comparative or descriptive phrases.

× I'm not entirely sure, but many people do send flowers, uh, in my country, uh, especially occasions like retirement, birthdays, like anniversary like that, uh, for example, it is common to give flowers to person who quit job.

✓ I'm not entirely sure, but many people do send flowers in my country, especially on occasions like retirement, birthdays, and anniversaries. For example, it is common to give flowers to a person who quits a job.

Multiple issues: preposition 'on' is needed before 'occasions'; plural forms 'anniversaries'; article 'a' required before 'person'; verb agreement 'quits' for third person singular; 'quit job' corrected to 'quits a job'. Also removed filler 'uh' and improved list punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'on' with 'occasions', keep consistent plural forms for general statements, include articles before singular nouns, and apply third person -s when referring to someone.